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Unwell

Even my best friend can't tell That I just don't feel well, Nothing's right, it's all wrong Though I try to stay strong, But all I feel is weak And sometimes these eyes leak, Yet even my so-called best friend can't tell That I'm definitely, Unwell...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/13/2013 9:30:00 AM
I identified with this poem. Strong emotion and I love the brevity; you say so much in few words. Good job and kudos; enjoyed your piece :)
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Date: 10/13/2013 7:26:00 AM
- Consult your doctor .... Wishing you all the best!! - Sad... but good to have friends who can be there for you .... nice poem Arthur. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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