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Untamed

I will not be tamed Life cannot harness my soul I race with the wind You cannot break my spirit I thunder on wild and free Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/2/2013 8:52:00 AM

Very significant write on love, Eileen

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2013 1:28:00 PM

Why thank you kindly, Dr Ram! :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/1/2013 12:30:00 PM

love tames even the wildest spirit beautiful piece

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2013 1:28:00 PM

Lovely post, Liam...Lovely!

Richard D Seal

Date: 10/1/2013 11:41:00 AM

Trampling over everything in your wake on doubt my little Desert Orchid, why not canter a while and smell the roses. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2013 1:30:00 PM

Richard D Seal

Date: 10/1/2013 11:41:00 AM

Trampling over everything in your wake on doubt my little Desert Orchid, why not canter a while and smell the roses. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2013 1:29:00 PM

Alright, if you say so...I'll canter a while...Don't want to trample beauty underfoot. You are ever so right, Mr Seal.....

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/1/2013 10:06:00 AM

You my dear: A thunderstorm! Only Zeus might tame you and that questionable! Excellent!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2013 1:31:00 PM

Exies Dikio, Demetri! Yes....I do love your post so very much! I don't think Zeus is a match for me...Thanks for the lovely post, my dear poet.

Poet Tacito

Date: 10/1/2013 8:24:00 AM

"Life cannot harness my soul"...yes. Your soul harnesses life. ;-) Awesome.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2013 1:32:00 PM

Thanks, Drake...at least...that is how it should be, Right? :) Lovely to read a reponse from you!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/1/2013 8:14:00 AM

Go girl! I like that indomitable spirit.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2013 1:34:00 PM

:) Thank you, Richard. I love the word indomitable...Mr Rochester said it to Jane Eyre in describing her will to resist him....What a fantastic scene that is! Absolutely riveting. Jane Eyre....BBC production staring Timothy Dalton. Watch it, Richard...it's awesome! Thanks for the post!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/1/2013 8:12:00 AM

What happened to your poem? I just finished commenting on it. Soup mail.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2013 1:35:00 PM

Fixed the mistakes...thanks! :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/1/2013 7:52:00 AM

You soar like a beautiful bird in the sky Eileen...Just beautiful

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2013 1:35:00 PM

Awwwwwww.....thanks, sweetie! I'm touched! Hugs!