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Untamed

Eileen  Manassian Avatar Eileen  Manassian - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Untamed

I will not be tamed
Life cannot harness my soul
I race with the wind
You cannot break my spirit
I thunder on wild and free
 
Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 10/2/2013 8:52:00 AM
    Very significant write on love, Eileen

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 10/2/2013 1:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Why thank you kindly, Dr Ram! :)
  1. Date: 10/1/2013 12:30:00 PM
    love tames even the wildest spirit beautiful piece

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 10/2/2013 1:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lovely post, Liam...Lovely!
  1. Date: 10/1/2013 11:41:00 AM
    Trampling over everything in your wake on doubt my little Desert Orchid, why not canter a while and smell the roses. Take care, Richard

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 10/2/2013 1:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :)
  1. Date: 10/1/2013 11:41:00 AM
    Trampling over everything in your wake on doubt my little Desert Orchid, why not canter a while and smell the roses. Take care, Richard

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 10/2/2013 1:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Alright, if you say so...I'll canter a while...Don't want to trample beauty underfoot. You are ever so right, Mr Seal.....
  1. Date: 10/1/2013 10:06:00 AM
    You my dear: A thunderstorm! Only Zeus might tame you and that questionable! Excellent!

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 10/2/2013 1:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Exies Dikio, Demetri! Yes....I do love your post so very much! I don't think Zeus is a match for me...Thanks for the lovely post, my dear poet.
  1. Date: 10/1/2013 8:24:00 AM
    "Life cannot harness my soul"...yes. Your soul harnesses life. ;-) Awesome.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 10/2/2013 1:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Drake...at least...that is how it should be, Right? :) Lovely to read a reponse from you!
  1. Date: 10/1/2013 8:14:00 AM
    Go girl! I like that indomitable spirit.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 10/2/2013 1:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Thank you, Richard. I love the word indomitable...Mr Rochester said it to Jane Eyre in describing her will to resist him....What a fantastic scene that is! Absolutely riveting. Jane Eyre....BBC production staring Timothy Dalton. Watch it, Richard...it's awesome! Thanks for the post!
  1. Date: 10/1/2013 8:12:00 AM
    What happened to your poem? I just finished commenting on it. Soup mail.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 10/2/2013 1:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Fixed the mistakes...thanks! :)
  1. Date: 10/1/2013 7:52:00 AM
    You soar like a beautiful bird in the sky Eileen...Just beautiful

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 10/2/2013 1:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awwwwwww.....thanks, sweetie! I'm touched! Hugs!