Unseen Friend

With an unseen friend Take a trip into the blue Let him talk nonsense That comes out of the blue You forget the path he paints

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Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 1/31/2015 7:31:00 AM

Master of Tanka,I visited you,unseen friend...

James Fraser

Date: 1/7/2015 5:28:00 AM

Words of wisdom and so true Rajat, nice poetry, James :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/7/2015 4:46:00 AM

A sane advice to one for to keep his sanity, dear Rajat! Excellent, my friend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2015 6:39:00 PM

I like how you used out of the blue. that is how talks is often perceived as nonsense. when it comes out of nowhere.

Robert Johnson

Date: 1/6/2015 6:36:00 PM

A moment shared is a moment learned. Another page of the book is turned. Reflections through the looking glass. Allows a dream to clearly pass. Talk about nonsense. :) Peace. :) Thank you for the nice visit RAJAT.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/6/2015 4:20:00 PM

Friends understand each other even if it seems like nonsense..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/6/2015 1:51:00 PM

right you are, rajat.. how compassionate and splendid is this piece.. huggs