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Unrequited Love

I got the full moon brought down for you, dear The nice flute stood there restlessly ready You didn’t come and all my dreams shook in fear Don’t lose heart, said the reassuring sea I nurtured a sky with whispering rain I had also brought a nice umbrella In blue haze you kept me waiting in vain In shock returned my empty gondola The tipsy wind of spring I still do raise My pocketful of moonlight is in wait When in sunset the sky makes love, I gaze And fill the pink wounds of void you create The light and shade from your window oh dear Are painful pearl drops mingling in my beer ______________________________________________ 30/11/2016

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Date: 12/5/2016 11:25:00 AM
Congrats Probir to win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/6/2016 4:41:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/3/2016 12:55:00 PM
At least your gondola now contains a coveted prize Probir.
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Jean Murray
Date: 12/4/2016 5:06:00 AM
True. Often more satisfying.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/4/2016 3:57:00 AM
Why? What about the flowers of like and love ? ... Thank you and love ... probir
Date: 12/2/2016 4:30:00 PM
cheers to you for makin it on the wnning list, probir..huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/2/2016 8:23:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/2/2016 8:54:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win, Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/2/2016 8:25:00 PM
Thank you ....
Date: 12/1/2016 12:37:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Probir! Wish I could give above 7. Janice
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/2/2016 3:46:00 AM
I am indeed honoured, Janice ... thank you ...
Date: 12/1/2016 4:22:00 AM
Lovely sonnet...fab vocab
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/2/2016 3:47:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/1/2016 3:49:00 AM
- I do not know which contest you have won ... but it's a beautiful sonnet which deserve to win - Congratulations ... a pleasure to read :) - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/2/2016 3:49:00 AM
That you, my fellow poets and readers like it, is the greatest reward ... thank you ...
Date: 11/30/2016 5:46:00 PM
beautiful but sad sonnet Probir congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/1/2016 12:07:00 AM
Thank you, Jan ...
Date: 11/30/2016 5:23:00 PM
Congratulations Probir in the placement of the contest.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/1/2016 12:08:00 AM
Thank you so much, Nayda ...
Date: 11/30/2016 12:50:00 PM
Masterclass! Highly romantic. I love the line 5 ' I nurtured a sky with whispering rain'. Good use of language.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/1/2016 12:09:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/30/2016 12:22:00 PM
This is so romantic, Probir, that last sentence so sad... Hugs eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/1/2016 12:09:00 AM
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Date: 11/30/2016 9:08:00 AM
What phantasmagoric expressions dear, Probir, certainly she doesn't deserve such a gentlemen as yourself! A seven!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/30/2016 11:43:00 AM
Thank you ... I like to write in first person ... This much ...
Date: 11/30/2016 8:12:00 AM
:: applause :: "The tipsy wind of spring I still do raise//My pocketful of moonlight is in wait//When in sunset the sky makes love, I gaze//And fill the pink wounds of void you create" = world class!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/30/2016 11:43:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/30/2016 6:42:00 AM
That is one special sonnet! I applaud you on your work, Probir /|\
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/30/2016 11:44:00 AM
Thank you, Rick ...

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