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UNITED

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME, (c)

Souls united Hearts merged Hopes and fears became identical Your concerns became my concerns In the same degree With the same intensity Indifferent I stay no more before your grief Before your joy I cry with you when you suffer I laugh when you joyful We have become one Inseparable into eternity For We truly love one-another! (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 03 October 2016

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Bozhidar Pangelov

Date: 10/11/2016 2:54:00 PM

Demetrius, this is a brilliant idea!!! Hopes and fears became identical

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/3/2016 12:31:00 PM

- There is no key to love, but we must always leave the door open - A 7, beautifully written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/3/2016 5:28:00 PM

True dearest Anne-Lise! Thank you for your beautiful visit and comment!

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/3/2016 11:59:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, That type of love would be amazing. I'm so happy for you.Well done.A undeniable seven:-) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/3/2016 5:30:00 PM

My dearest, Alexis, that type of love is amazing if one works hard for it and sacrifices his ego on its altar! Thank you so much!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 10/3/2016 7:35:00 AM

What a wonderful place to be. Well said.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/3/2016 10:05:00 AM

Always a pleasure to see you dear, Scott! Thank you for visiting and commenting!

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/3/2016 5:05:00 AM

Sublime ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/3/2016 10:03:00 AM

You so generous, dear friend, Probir! Thank you!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/3/2016 3:12:00 AM

Hearts merged describes two soulmates so beautifully Demtrios. A lovely romantic poem for a lucky lady! : ) 7

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/3/2016 9:59:00 AM

Connie my dear, what a pleasure to see you! Thank you for your visit and gracious comment! I am the lucky dear Connie not the lady! Haha!