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Union of Disguising Faces

wow! A sweet couple’s vague love of whole night everything of day time seems to be bright union of disguising faces falsely improvise living with blocked hearts tend to demise lives are in disease of traumatic condition they show their false sleeping no suspicion even when one snores other lodges no complain conspiring images of outsiders passes in vein suddenly wife’s cell rings that’s in vibrating mood awaking from false deep sleep he becomes a tiger rude sees the number that is of a neighbor’s guy thought got the final result after observing as a spy as she is caught red handed she's ranted high once he’s also caught so she tried to give him eye then he's given thanks to her as she did not spill about him actually they are the same meaning of same synonym For Contest: Desperate Housewife - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/3/2016 8:18:00 AM

Congrats on your win in Linda's contest.;0)

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/3/2016 11:06:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful wishes. Loved always. bl

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/3/2016 7:07:00 AM

This is great! Congrats :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/3/2016 11:03:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always. bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/2/2016 11:50:00 PM

BL, Congratulations on your Desperate House Wife WIN. I thank you for writing for my contest. Stop by my latest blog "UNION OF DISGUISING FACES "HZ1" blog #2." if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/3/2016 10:24:00 AM

Thanks my lovely *friend for giving my poem in placement. Loved always, bl

Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/5/2016 6:31:00 PM

Its beautiful BL, or as you always say it is lovely... This poem can be written in a form of Rubai as well, with a little change. wow! A sweet couple’s vague love of whole night, everything of day time seems to be bright. union of disguising faces falsely improvise, living with blocked hearts will be like death and blight.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/5/2016 9:47:00 PM

Surely, whatever you do will be great.

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/5/2016 6:43:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Another new poem i will write in the form of Rubai surely. Loved always, bl

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/4/2016 3:45:00 AM

Wonderful rhyme depicting a situation that one wouldn't like to be! A seven, my friend BLD!

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/4/2016 9:44:00 AM

Thanks for your inspiring comment my lovely friend. Loved always, bl