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Unified Heartbeat

Like the heart that got washed away by the sea Like the blessings shown on us flying away Lost love crumbles before us which cannot be The need outweighs the displeasure of each day But life ceased the unified heartbeat within Time made these broken links, knocking off our grin We were once inseparable, but now moved Like stars in the sky falling, they’re disapproved Russell Sivey Based on an old relationship.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/31/2014 10:54:00 AM
Oh Russell this made me so sad - beautifully written emotional poem. Hope things have improved since then. Hugs Jan x
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Date: 3/4/2014 5:53:00 AM
Reads like this relationship was worse than crying a river for the sea had its fill of it..Great work about love lost..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 3/4/2014 5:49:00 AM
Life means change and change is life, my friend Russell. Let us wait for change again the balance to bring and the hearts to sing the song of unity once more!
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Date: 3/3/2014 1:16:00 PM
Hi Russell, You inspired me to give this form a try, please let me know if I got it right. Thanks Richard.
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Date: 3/3/2014 8:37:00 AM
I'm glad you escaped this relationship, you are a fortunate man. We are on similar wave lengths today. I enjoyed your Rispetto.
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Date: 3/3/2014 3:12:00 AM
That is life Russell,20 children can not play for 20 years;can they even play for 10 years? We live today. Great work Russell.Kudos.
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Date: 3/3/2014 12:01:00 AM
It's history now. Live in the present. Another fine write, Russell.
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