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Unfinished words

Unfinished words

You've disappeared, now gone without a trace.
Meaningless, now gone to waste.

I know to you, this but a story,
Seemingly ending in, I'm sorry.

Allowing you to let me down, 
Foolishly waiting for you to turn around.

This empty reflection
Not yet worth a mention.

Your soaring eyes, now my demise.
Endless times, I had to try.

Not yet lost, yet here I was.
Strong enough to remain above.

To be so bold, 
to have been told. 

Watching from a distance, as you start letting go.
Never, have I been so low...

All the pieces you have left to find,
Slowly disappearing, now remind.

All I am, all we are, 
Capture this distance, now gone to far... 

My message I can not send,
Knowing this would be to hard for you to comprehend.

Spitting out smoke, standing here soaked,
Endless times we could have spoke.

Reviewing all the steps that have been taken,
To be shown in the end, I was indeed mistaken... 

Now knowing nothing much has changed, 
No final words, now left unclaimed!

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  1. Date: 11/13/2012 9:34:00 AM
    Anne Lise Anderson: Thank you for the lovely compliment regarding my poem. As for it being sad, well it was a way of expressing self frustration through thoughts that never get the chance to surface. We all have a vault full of those don't we? ;) Cheers! Dark_Mistress (Aka) Wishing you a wonderful weekend as well. ?

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 9:32:00 AM
    Rachel St.Cross: You are to sweet. Emotions through expression through ones writing is definately my favorite way to express myself. It simply comes with ease. Wishing you the same remarkable feeling when you express yourself through your own writing. Cheers! Dark_Mistress

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 10:51:00 AM
    A very well written poem Manon, but a little sad. - Wishing you a wonderful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 11/10/2012 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Anne Lise. Wishing you the same. ? It is a sad poem as it is meant to take the reader to the points of human frustration of not being heared even though inches from eachother... simply being ingnored even if unintensional. We've all been there. Found it inspiring to put into words... play on words, I guess you can say. ;) Cheers! Dark_Mistress (Aka, Manon)