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Unfaithful

Humanism Atheism Independent moral authoritarian, Where lies your omnipotence Whilst your star plummet from the sky?

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John Loving Iii

Date: 2/25/2009 6:14:00 PM

Wow. straight and to the point. almost damnation if it were'nt already alotted. john

Arany P.

Date: 2/22/2009 1:28:00 AM

lovely truth!! ~ Arany

John Heck

Date: 1/30/2009 3:27:00 PM

LOL! At first I thought you used the word impotence...at my age - that's a scary thought! Your writes always stir and raise an eyebrow. Also, I may join Facebook. All my friends are twisting my arm to sign-up. So don't be shocked if I rear my ugly head on your site! LOL! Be good, buddy and have a great weekend. Peace always, J.