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when under your wings my heart was safe and secure ~*~ why did they unfold? Eileen Manassian Another one of my deleted poems....Reposting. :) I really like the picture that goes with this one.

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Date: 8/19/2015 9:08:00 PM
I am glad you reposted it. I don't think I had seen it before, and I really like it!!
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Date: 8/19/2015 9:31:00 AM
"To everything there is a season..." I agree with Rick's comment but understand the sentiment behind the plaintive cry of a wounded child, Eileen. A touching, heartfelt write. Loved it! hugs!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2015 9:33:00 AM
Hey, Sweetie. Thanks for passing by. I hope you are feeling better. There is a verse about the safety we fell under the Father's wings. In the end....that is the only real place to be safe. Sending hugs.
Date: 8/19/2015 5:06:00 AM
To be embraced by the wings of love is the outmost sensation of safety. When they unfold they invite us to rise to the heaven of bliss! A marvelous poetic poem! A seven, dear Eileen!
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Date: 8/18/2015 9:45:00 AM
With wings folded around you, you are not able to fly! Lovely piece and picture Eileen.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/18/2015 9:50:00 AM
Yes, but sometimes it feels good to be nestled in warmth and safety, Richard. Thanks for the visit, dear.
Date: 8/18/2015 8:38:00 AM
I can really relate to this one Eileen. lovely Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/18/2015 9:51:00 AM
Thanks, Tim. I'm glad it has struck a responsive chord in you. :)
Date: 8/18/2015 7:14:00 AM
Glad you reposted this Eileen, this is a gem. You say so much here and I agree with you, this picture goes well with it :) hugs Wilma
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/18/2015 7:16:00 AM
Hey, dear....thanks for the visit to my work. Honestly I think the picture could stand on its own. I love finding pics to go with my work. :) Hugs
Date: 8/18/2015 7:05:00 AM
I'm glad you reposted because this brings so many emotions and questions in this little write...and the picture is very neat :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/18/2015 7:07:00 AM
Hey you!!! Lovely to get a visit from you. BTW...Love your avatar! Don't you look sweet. Hugs! :)

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