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Under the Flower Moon

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Over a period of time I have been writing Unrhymed tercets
Buds begin to grow amongst thorns Magic the heart sings inside warm feelings spirit of you enchanting emotions As the petals begin to open and French kiss Flowering warmly sunlight promise in morning dew we dance the tango of colour completely A dream wind sipping of the breathless whisper in love with you echoes within a sigh cries out your name sweetly beholder When beauty kisses the beast a mountain crumbles to your feet One river flows into this ocean forever young and beautiful You define me as I see the warmth embracing Everything in your eyes magic appears

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Date: 5/20/2016 11:27:00 AM
and you really entice.. nice write, liam..huggs
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Date: 5/20/2016 10:30:00 AM
Wonderful romantic poem that will sing to every lady's heart, dear Liam!
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Date: 5/20/2016 10:20:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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