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Under Spells

As golden sunlight streamed through the curtains A vision touching deeply As birds began singing adoring sunlight Looking into your eyes enters A treasure in the heart one true gift within a thousand dreams Holding hands Ever so softly whispers Standing before me Delicately breathing everything that is beautiful in life Love you are an angel on wings who holds majestic the soul ever so warmly sings Flooding with deep magic surrounding the heart captured kisses your grace Joy dances on each skipping beat

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 2/12/2016 3:44:00 PM

A delightful poem of love and devotion... lovely phrasing and gorgeous imagery! Well done Liam!! Best wishes, Keith

White Sage

Date: 1/21/2016 7:57:00 PM

Lovely write Liam, well written

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/20/2016 7:39:00 PM

Liam, it's been a while since I've stopped by to read your poems. I'm delighted to read this one. A beautiful spell controlled by the heart. Loving imagery. The perfect hand and hand poem. A 7+ from me to you. Love LINDA

Chrissie Morris Brady

Date: 1/20/2016 12:18:00 PM

Liam, you've crafted this beautifully! It's romantic, and so tender...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/20/2016 12:02:00 PM

- Lines so soft, beautiful as heaven timbre dear Liam - Beautiful poem !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/20/2016 8:49:00 AM

your lovely expressions of romance is limitless, liam... wonderful!..huggs

Miraj Raha

Date: 1/20/2016 8:39:00 AM

this flowed wildly like a river,conquering every obstacle or barrier posed to land gently on the desolate shore of bliss.excellent liam.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/20/2016 6:18:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/20/2016 5:23:00 AM

As calm, as the waters of the deep river flow, your poetry is: Majestic! A seven, dear Liam!