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Undead Boogie

She asks "May I dance with you, sweet Dracula I really enjoy your Transylvania Twist Perhaps later on a sexy slow dance I'll happily expose neck and wrist I love that red cape flows with ease While others stare with jealous eyes The undead boogie is such a treat It makes me feel weak in my thighs Your eyes are very hypnotic I have not one thought for another Yes my blood has begun to turn cold Still you make this heart feel a flutter When the evening is done don't fly away I'll gladly accompany you to your crypt Just one more time around the dance floor Wait! Is that my blood I see on your lip?" For the May I Dance With You Halloween Contest sponsored by Galen DS. Note: "Transylvania Twist" is from the song Monster Mash.

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Date: 10/31/2016 12:01:00 PM
Congrats well-done great poem x
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/3/2016 3:17:00 PM
Thanks Wendy.
Date: 10/31/2016 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your amazing Halloween Poem and win my dear friend, Richard. Thank you for your participation and support in my contest. Hugs!
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Date: 10/30/2016 6:19:00 PM
This is awesome Halloween fun, RIchard. Glad to find this one the night before Halloween!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/31/2016 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.;0)
Date: 10/21/2016 11:41:00 PM
OH DEAR!!! This was...morbidly entertaining! :) Good luck in the contest, dear. It does make one think how often we flirt with evil...and think we can get away with it. Hugs
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Date: 10/21/2016 12:54:00 AM
A beautiful light write.
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Date: 10/20/2016 2:35:00 PM
This will place high I so believe...I loved it...And cant stop smiling at the imagery Im placing on qmy mind.: )
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Date: 10/19/2016 4:41:00 PM
Very funny poem, Richard. I guess that was a rave from the grave party. Ha ha ha. Ty for the laughs. Love always to you and yours.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/20/2016 9:10:00 AM
Thanks again Freddie.
Date: 10/19/2016 11:42:00 AM
A good fun piece that made me smile. Good luck for the contest!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2016 12:09:00 PM
Thanks Anna-Marie
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2016 12:08:00 PM
Thanks Scott
Date: 10/19/2016 6:58:00 AM
Great words my friend. My smile stretches from ear to ear. Best of luck in the contest.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2016 7:50:00 AM
Thanks Scott
Date: 10/18/2016 6:47:00 AM
Good to see you dancing to the Pumpkin Cha Cha Hope you win the contest Hugs Mom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/18/2016 7:05:00 PM
Thanks mom, love ya.
Date: 10/17/2016 3:20:00 AM
You made it appear so fun dear , Richard that made me think that you perhaps.. .Oh no, it could never be! Haha! Enjoyed it my friend!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/17/2016 7:58:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios, I'm pleased you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/17/2016 12:24:00 AM
Never dance cheek to cheek with a Vampire, eh, Richard? Fun write, good luck in the contest. Regards, Viv
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/17/2016 7:58:00 AM
Thanks Viv.
Date: 10/16/2016 9:49:00 PM
Well done, for some reason I have the song Monster Mash in my head!!! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2016 11:12:00 PM
I checked the Lyrics and they used the Transylvania Twist. No wonder my poem reminded you of the song.
Date: 10/16/2016 8:35:00 PM
Very intriguing!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2016 11:12:00 PM
Thanks Sarita.
Date: 10/16/2016 6:35:00 PM
He did the mash! Fun read, Richard. You might want to wipe that blood from your lip:)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2016 7:32:00 PM
"They call me the Count because I like to count." Thanks for the visit Daniel.
Date: 10/16/2016 6:07:00 PM
Entertaining read, who gets to lead when you're dancing the undead boogie? :) Bloody good.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2016 7:33:00 PM
Thanks Paloma.
Date: 10/16/2016 5:26:00 PM
I love it! Oh course Halloween is my fave...when I fit in the most, and think I might try a go at your transylvania twist. Nice write Rick :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2016 7:34:00 PM
I had fun writing this little ditty. Thanks Casarah.

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