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Unclad Flower

. Crunch left-over leaves of winter Peek the premature green growth of spring Touch the unclad flower’s bloom at the climax of Summer’s zenith

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/31/2011 7:34:00 AM

enjoyed reading.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/23/2011 8:03:00 AM

Just pouring my second cup of morning coffee and you have me wishing and dreaming of flowers on this cold , sunny day. We still have 3 feet of snow around but slowly melting a little each day. love phyl

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 3/23/2011 4:03:00 AM

Beautiful poem flourishing perfume on paper. . .lovely to read you again dear poet.

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/21/2011 2:41:00 PM

enjoyed the free spirit i found, in the direction this worthy write, that leads my senses on James.

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/21/2011 1:52:00 AM

enjoyed this wonderful heart rendering poem, James. Harry

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/19/2011 5:25:00 PM

soft smile, a woman named Summer how lovely! Please read Differences Divine to Noah! Show him Robb's Picture too! [contest] Light & Love

Daver Austin

Date: 3/19/2011 5:19:00 AM

And a beautiful, long awaited flower it is, Sir James. At the moment my entire being is concerned with the sensation of approaching spring, but love your summer thoughts. Love, Dave

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/18/2011 8:34:00 PM

James u charm me with your sweet comments my friend .. deeply understanding my lines so well ... appreciate your input into my contest entries luv.. joyous always to read your lines ..happy weekend...

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/18/2011 8:18:00 PM

Oh James this is beautiful. Your images are so close to nature and lovingly penned. Thanks for all your support to me. much appreciated.

Dana Smith

Date: 3/18/2011 4:46:00 PM

Awwww:)

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/18/2011 11:59:00 AM

I love your title for this one James, has a lovely feeling to it as well.. smiles to you ;) and enjoy the weekend ahead, love Wilma

John Freeman

Date: 3/18/2011 8:29:00 AM

Beautiful budding thoughts put forth in full bloom, James. You also have a wonderful weekend. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/18/2011 8:22:00 AM

So you've met a girl named Summer, James? She sounds lovely, dear friend. I have been busy lately and returned your Soup mail. Love you always, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/18/2011 8:19:00 AM

May I return the sweet comment James and say Summer is my best time of the Season for I excel in everything as the hot weather inspires me every moment.. this lovely piece is so visually aromatic I can touch the lines with my mind my friend.. ever a joy to read your work James..happy weekend luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/18/2011 7:27:00 AM

what a mood cheery and sublime... great write that lifts my soul, james... no wonder spring and summer are between winter and fall! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/16/2011 11:01:00 PM

HOw nice, and symbolic too I see!! You had four wives, james?? geeez! Cupid got you good. hahaha

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2011 9:38:00 PM

yes and a smile to you,,, sure enjoyed,, your poem,, and just the other day a friend,, told me,, nothing becomes everything of beauty,,, meaning old leaves find a way of beauty,,, ((bloom)).. and when we die,, i thought we fell into a world of nothingness,,, but truly we bloom for eternity,, well my thought,,lol,,, still a cool poem,, and i will smile,,, enjoyed,..p.d.