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Written: September 3rd, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ In this realm where gloom weaves its snare, Where sorrow can seem too much to bear, I understand and share in your vehement pain. When burdens weigh—hope begins to wane. As tears won't come and the heart is numb. I shed blood, not tears, and my soul succumbs. But hump, my friend, we are not alone. Who else is God, and where is his throne? Under His care, we seek refuge. In times of despair, his guidance is huge. We ask for his assistance—to be strong. In his presence—we cognize we belong. If you become a philosopher, as you wish, You'll witness the truth and a maple dish. Engaging in pointless feuds, so it appears, But in the vast venture, they're a trifling clear. Insignificant souls, lost in their own strife, Fighting battles that hold no meaning, no life, But we, with unyielding hearts, rise above. Knowing our worth and embracing love In the depths of pain and despair, We find strength, resilience, and repair. We stand tall, united, hand in hand, Defying the gloom that tries to expand Measly souls may strain to draw us down. But our unyielding hearts refuse to frown. We hold on to hope; we cling to belief. In this chaotic world, love is the only relief.

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Date: 9/7/2023 3:46:00 PM
You know, I have sometimes gone off through a philisophical tangent, but I agree with your poem! :)
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Date: 9/6/2023 6:57:00 AM
THE WISDOM IN THESE LINES IS A CREED FOR ALL MANKIND. "Insignificant souls, lost in their own strife, Fighting battles that hold no meaning, no life, But we, with unyielding hearts, rise above. Knowing our worth and embracing love Measly souls may strain to draw us down. But our unyielding hearts refuse to frown. We hold on to hope; we cling to belief. In this chaotic world, love is the only relief." I BOW TO YOUR GENIUS.
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Date: 9/3/2023 2:28:00 PM
Your entire poem tells a tale of the pain and strife in today's world, the struggle between right and wrong. The words 'fighting battles that hold no meaning' struck a chord with me. Too much distracting, meaningless babble in today's chaotic world. Like you, I cling to faith and hope believing that love will provide a cure. Great stuff.
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Date: 9/3/2023 12:49:00 PM
Our souls have many enemies as they pan on our downfall. But love will always win. Great poem.
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Date: 9/3/2023 12:32:00 PM
What eloquent poem. do you ever write anything bad? Another brilliant poem o must praise. And i wonder how many minutes does it take for you to write these gems? They are all so profound. And i agree and i needed to hear this too, theres no point fighting meaningless battles, focus on light and let faith guide you through despair and pain. In this chaotic world yes love is the only relief. What a most deeply moving write this is. I am truly inspired
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Date: 9/3/2023 2:23:00 PM
Dear Ink, your words have the power to ignite a fire within me, filling me with a sense of inspiration. It's as if your heartfelt sentiments flow from the very depths of your being, leaving me in awe of your genuine kindness. I am immensely grateful for your unwavering support and encouragement. Writing, for me, is a profound connection to the very essence of my being. It is a sacred dance between my soul and the divine muse that dwells within. When this ethereal connection is established, time loses all meaning, and I become completely consumed by the creative process. It is a transcendent experience that transcends the constraints of this earthly realm, allowing my spirit to soar freely.

Book: Shattered Sighs