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Ultramarine Blue Sky: a Personification

I lay prone above the surface of the earth: a boundless expanse of ultramarine blue, gazing at every living and nonliving thing, the air so clean and pure. Where are they? cotton pieces that loiter around like fluffy soft white bunnies that scurry around scattering and wandering playfully: clouds that float with fleecy wings oh.. I do not see them today! It is a beautiful early evening; As no clouds to obstruct my view, from above, I could catch a glimpse of many a poetic mind: dreamy and forlorn lying on their back in the grass, here and there within corners of the earth, staring blank at my vast serene blue when waves of woes were crashing at the rocky edges of their mind - and into a deep trance, they enter. To ease their distress, I whisper into the ears of the infinite seas, to send gentle cool breeze their way and wake them up from their reverie with a gentle kiss in their gloomy eyes, igniting embers of hope in their dreary mind. As they open their eyes and wake up from their trance with many a fresh thoughts to pen - their muse gets charged by the charm of my ultramarine blue inspiration: I become their unbounded diary of blue pages, as they now sprinkle their inspired ink on my vast blue expanse with their bright gleaming perceptive eyes. Date: 11/14/2021 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 19 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Mark Toney "U" Contest, New Poems Only Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 12/6/2023 6:44:00 AM
Wow this is absolutely stunning dear anitha, how beautiful is the way you describe things is such detail. I really love the bunnies line and how you’ve described fleeting clouds is beyond artistic. Depth of this poem too blew me away .: such exquisite imagery. I love how you’ve done this personification: also “ I whisper into the ears of the infinite seas, to send gentle cool breeze their way and wake them up from their reverie” wow! Just love it! Congrats on bein on winners list
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/6/2023 6:10:00 PM
Thank you so very much dear Ink. You are such a talented poetess and a beautiful soul.. a treasure to our Soup community of poets. This is an old fav poem of mine. Thank you again for your kind words of appreciation on my simple verse. Hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 12/6/2023 5:57:00 AM
An epic poem Anitha, one that has been written is great personification.. You have always been a lovely person and friend on Poetry Soup.. Thank you for always supporting me and my simple poems.. Congratulations on having your poem showcased..
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/6/2023 6:41:00 AM
Thank you so very much for the contest and your wonderful words of appreciation S1. It was easy to enter this old fav poem of mine. Yours.simple poems??? oh my...It was only by reading your great inspiring verses, I started to scribble something in verses. You were one of the few who supported me so much during my initial days of writing here. Thank you so much dear poetic friend. God bless. ~ Ani
Date: 11/23/2022 3:59:00 PM
Beautiful! Well done. Congratulations :)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/24/2022 9:33:00 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi... Much appreciate... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 11/15/2022 10:50:00 AM
So lovely Ani - a dreamy reverie of personification in delicate shades of blue! Every line flows like it is being carried by streams of air! Congratulations on your win! Blessings of sweeping tranquility to you!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/24/2022 9:32:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear Sam... Much appreciate... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 11/13/2022 8:23:00 AM
Anitha, this is a beautiful piece of writing. Thoughts take on many forms and the muse renders them to verse… such gift that has been given to us humans. Congrats as well!
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Date: 11/12/2022 7:11:00 PM
Dear Ani, my inspiring friend, magnificence spills from your gifted pen. I adore your personification and admire your amazing imagery. I was swept up and away by the eloquence of your poem's metaphorical beauty. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/11/2022 9:56:00 AM
Ani, your personification poetry is enchanting. "Their muse gets charged ~ by the charm of my ~ ultramarine blue inspiration: I become ~ their unbounded diary of blue pages, ~ as they now sprinkle their inspired ink ~ on my vast blue expanse with their ~ bright gleaming perceptive eyes." Wow! Congratulations on your win on Mile 19 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on because Mile 20 has already started.
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Date: 11/20/2021 7:30:00 AM
Very nice, congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 11/17/2021 2:05:00 PM
wow what awesome personification Ani, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/17/2021 5:41:00 AM
Excellent personification, Anitha, big congratulations:)
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Date: 11/16/2021 3:43:00 PM
back again just to say hi. I just knew this would win big.
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Date: 11/16/2021 1:06:00 PM
Ani, magnificent poem and congratulations on your First Place win in my "U" Contest, New Poems and your quote is quite beautiful ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 11/16/2021 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations on this wonderful win. An amazing write. Have a blessed day writing away........................
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Date: 11/16/2021 6:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Anitha, on your top win. Wonderful composition - love the form "Personification". Each and every line is oozing with lyrical beauty. Love and hugs ~ Mala
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Date: 11/16/2021 4:59:00 AM
Amazing composition, dearest Anitha. Blessings.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/16/2021 5:10:00 AM
So glad to hear from you Demetrios... How are you?. Thank you so much for the visit and comment... Do take care... God bless.. ~ Ani
Date: 11/15/2021 7:01:00 PM
You are a champion Ani !!! Big hugs and congratulations on your number 1 !! Thrilled for you . Back again . I love it !! Hugs to you my friend , Susan xx
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Date: 11/15/2021 6:21:00 PM
This is a lovely composition ! So happy to see that a young poet of your age could do so well. Love the lines................. "as they now sprinkle their inspired ink on my vast blue expanse with their bright gleaming perceptive eyes." Hearty Congratulations !
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Date: 11/15/2021 2:10:00 PM
Beautiful personification, Anitha, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/15/2021 1:35:00 PM
wow, Anitha I am seeing this is a number one poem and it really deserves it .This is stunning and one of the best you have written. a Big FAVE
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Date: 11/15/2021 12:24:00 PM
I am happy that you won at the TOP of #1. BIG congrats to you, Ani.
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Date: 11/15/2021 10:23:00 AM
A very beautiful poem like many other poems of yours. "I become their unbounded diary of blue pages," Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/14/2021 7:16:00 AM
A dreamy ride of wonder dear Ani !! I loved every moment of it . The inspiration from your heart is infinite and I love being a part of your artistic and soulful journey. A fav for me ! Xxxx love to you , Susan :)
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Date: 11/13/2021 12:28:00 PM
Awesome write, Ani. A wonderful adulation lauding the blue expanse of cloudless skies. Enjoyed the write in your hues of nature--a lovely ride on your words of inspiration. All the best.
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Date: 11/13/2021 12:25:00 PM
THIS POEM IS MAGNIFICENT, IT IS AWESOME, IT IS CREATIVE AND YOU MY DEAR WONDERFUL FRIEND CREATED A GEM - i simply love your vivid imagination and your zest for life. BLESS YOU ALWAYS. Sorry about caps. in between, its been a long day, but loved every moment of it! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 11/13/2021 11:42:00 AM
Ultra poetic composition, Ani. Best for a win.
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