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Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

My brain and heart battling Spinning can’t find my footing My world is dying Was this my doing? On my face I am smiling In my heart I am crying Took something that was beautiful and destroyed it

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Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 2/28/2013 1:30:00 PM

I felt every word here..and I agree with your repsonse..that pain is a good thing, it reminds us that we are living. :)

Ale A A
Date: 3/1/2013 3:44:00 AM

Thank you Pace for commenting.

Daver Austin

Date: 2/27/2013 7:00:00 AM

Sorry for the loss. Enjoyed the poem. daver

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/27/2013 5:08:00 AM

Abigale...I feel every nuance of pain this poem portrays...Don't be so hard on yourself...we live and learn and keep moving forward. This is an very great write. Thanks for sharing. Also, thanks for your visit on my poem. I appreciate it.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/27/2013 4:48:00 AM

- The feeling is painful, Abigale ! - Well written ! -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nate Spears

Date: 2/26/2013 2:21:00 PM

Nice, I have a poem called Death Of A Rose that shares the same expression!!! Love your work!!!

Ale A A
Date: 2/26/2013 7:51:00 PM

Thanks Nate I will read it

Jack Ellison

Date: 2/26/2013 12:33:00 PM

We all go through these moments in our lives. Eventually it will pass and you'll wonder what all the fuss was about. There are exceptions to ever rule of course, but after 77 years, this what I have discovered. Keep 'em coming my dear Abigale... hugs, Jack xox

Ale A A
Date: 2/26/2013 7:53:00 PM

Jack writing has been the best pain reliver of any alignments of the heart.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/26/2013 12:09:00 PM

Abigale, i know the feeling,, and the hard part is when it can't be restored... they will never know how we get lost in one moment. xox~PD

Ale A A
Date: 2/26/2013 8:02:00 PM

Thank you Poet Destroyer.

David Williams

Date: 2/26/2013 11:19:00 AM

Abigale it can be put right...David

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/26/2013 4:00:00 AM

Deep soul searching question, the answer is this: Learning the ways of the world and of your heart. A painful process it is indeed, but suffering is the source of wisdom! I think part of the answer to your question you have seeing in my today's poem. You have done nothing wrong! Excellent work! Thank you!!

Ale A A
Date: 2/26/2013 4:17:00 AM

No Thank you my dear Demetrios for your kind words.

Dan Kearley

Date: 2/26/2013 3:36:00 AM

A very touchy write here....I wish I could help with the pain.Stay strong and regain your footing. :o)

Ale A A
Date: 2/26/2013 3:38:00 AM

Dan pain is a good thing. It reminds me I am still living.