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Tyler's Song

When I hear it, it makes me wanna cry. Following along, makes me wanna die. He sings it to me all the time. Can we make this love something more than a crime? It hurts to think of him night and day and somehow, he makes the pain go away. Missing the sound of his voice, yet I can still hear it above the noise. His love drives me insane, but his eyes are worth the pain. I wish he could really see the true love that is within me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/12/2010 11:14:00 AM
Cry!! this is dramatic, but thats romance for you.
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Date: 2/12/2009 9:50:00 AM
Beautifully written filled with emotion.
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Date: 1/22/2009 2:50:00 PM
Wow....You're really really talented...and you're only 14? You go girl! ~Oreo
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Date: 1/16/2009 9:19:00 AM
Congrats on your feature, and I like your title..Tyler
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Date: 12/27/2008 10:02:00 AM
Serenity - Congratulations on your feature this week! Wishing you a Happy & Healthy New Year. Peace always, John
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Date: 12/24/2008 3:41:00 PM
Beautiful love write here, Serenity and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/23/2008 6:15:00 PM
Congratulations Serenity on the featuring of "Tyler's Song." Vince
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Date: 12/22/2008 8:57:00 PM
Congrats on being featured this week, Happy Holidays...Raul
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Date: 12/22/2008 7:48:00 PM
Really nice song, congrats on being featured this week.
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Date: 12/22/2008 7:47:00 PM
Really nice song, congrats on being featured this week.
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Date: 12/22/2008 3:25:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 12/22/2008 8:28:00 AM
Serenity, your words of choice drip with emotion as they reach out to touch your readers in your own special kind of way as I applaud you for a job well done. Congratulations for being featured here as I close by saying may your holiday be safe and filled with happiness. Wonderful Poem... MPK
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Date: 12/22/2008 12:23:00 AM
Serenity - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/21/2008 3:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/21/2008 3:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/16/2008 9:24:00 AM
I Love This Poem SOOOO Much!!!! I think cause it reminds me of my Best Friend Tyler Bourne. . Love Your Friend Alexz ^_^
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Date: 12/9/2008 10:25:00 AM
I like this one the best too ;o)
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Date: 12/9/2008 9:27:00 AM
oops.. on that last comment I meant to put relationship lol...
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Date: 12/9/2008 9:26:00 AM
This is basically my favorite poem of mine just because it's really special to me. :) It's about tyler, the guy I've loved for 3 years. Sadly, as of right now, we are broken up. But hey, it's hard to keep a good relaionship when you're only 14!! lol....
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