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Two Walks

On my walk in the country, I might see a deer; Or a fox or a bear Might from hiding appear. And aside from the birdsong, I won’t hear a sound But my footsteps or leaves As they crunch on the ground. When I stroll in the city, It’s noisy and loud. I’m never alone But just one of a crowd. The vista keeps changing Each minute, each day. There’s so much to see As I go on my way. I like both my walks; They’re the yang and the yin And together they balance What’s roiling within.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/30/2014 7:15:00 PM
I'll take the country walk any day.
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Date: 9/29/2014 5:12:00 PM
The afternoon can look so different, depending on where you're at. I hope you had the time to enjoy both and just sat. Peace. :)
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Date: 9/29/2014 7:17:00 AM
really very beautifully penned picture smiling
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Date: 9/27/2014 11:47:00 AM
Nice urban/rural juxtaposition here! Happy New Year to you and yours! B'Shalom Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/27/2014 7:52:00 AM
We Indians call them "Shiva" and "Shakti" complementing each other. A great poem. LOVE ilene.
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Date: 9/27/2014 7:36:00 AM
Beautiful conception of the philosophy of opposites that has as a result our being, dear Ilene! Inspiring!
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