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Who am I to take her innocence. To caress her untouched virgin fibers. This is not a negative connotation of lust, it's an intimate overtone to show affection. I tell my heart to be patient, yet it irks from the rub of lingering and it's flustered - feeling lost, as tomorrow has no guarantee, but she lives in a fantasy of dreams, where her mind paints a different reality. Art of the heart is not so simple - in our predicament of sensibility and it would be selfish to convince her to stay, but tragic to let her leave and then she tells me how she cant live without me, so we remain helpless, two souls on two different shores - content with being lost at sea. Simple Musing Silent One 30 October 2019

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Melani Udaeta

Date: 11/24/2019 5:22:00 PM

Wow. Fantastic.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/23/2019 11:41:00 AM

Two souls on two different shores yes drowning with nothing to save them. Deep can feel those waves pulling them under... so much emotion in this poem. love phyl

Darrell Rose

Date: 11/23/2019 9:30:00 AM

Smooth...... thoughtful, reflective and deep. No more need be said but “Beautifully done !” Darrell

Charles Messina

Date: 11/20/2019 8:50:00 PM

You are silent..but deadly my friend. I think I commented on this before..but that's okay, it's so good it's worth another Bravo! Great poetry SO

Dm Babbit

Date: 11/20/2019 8:43:00 AM

So many of us are lost souls, but in time, I hope we all find one another before it's too late. Truly loved this .

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/4/2019 7:43:00 AM

WoW! Silent, This is deep and well written. Two lost souls , although they are adrift at different shores, they're content being lost at sea. WoW! Excellent write. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis

Brenda Chiri

Date: 11/3/2019 6:51:00 AM

Simply beautiful S1! Lovely as ever!;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/2/2019 9:24:00 AM

Wow, I love how this pulls in two directions. I feel the churning of the ocean and felt moved by your waves of passion.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 11/2/2019 7:34:00 AM

Very beautiful.

Silent One
Date: 11/2/2019 7:37:00 AM

Thank you..

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 11/2/2019 7:06:00 AM

For you to have commented on my poem Butterfly Lust, I’m in lost for words with this gem of yours I’ve just read. You used and image that caught my attention at instant...then with your words you carefully penned each line that had me craving for more. Great way to share an experience most can relate to. Love your work...loving your style! INK

Silent One
Date: 11/2/2019 7:37:00 AM

Thank you.. happy you liked it..

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/2/2019 6:47:00 AM

I've experienced this one...and it's proven bitter sweet,"two souls on two different shores - content with being lost at sea"

Silent One
Date: 11/2/2019 6:50:00 AM

I think many have experienced this one... Thank you..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2019 8:22:00 PM

I really like this one and the ending is superb for it!

Silent One
Date: 11/2/2019 6:50:00 AM

Thank you Andrea..

Sanjay Karmakar

Date: 11/1/2019 2:44:00 AM

Very emotional romantic writing. Wonderfully done. Wishing the best my dear poet. With regards. sk.

Silent One
Date: 11/2/2019 6:49:00 AM

Thank you..

Hello There

Date: 10/31/2019 11:00:00 PM

Wow...this song with that picture and those words...a killer combo, my friend. Stunning, really.

Silent One
Date: 11/2/2019 6:49:00 AM

thank you my friend...

Ann Foster

Date: 10/31/2019 8:56:00 PM

This was lovely, so well written. Breathless...ness... Ann

Silent One
Date: 11/2/2019 6:54:00 AM

thank you..

Eve Roper

Date: 10/31/2019 3:29:00 PM

beautiful muse my friend

Silent One
Date: 11/2/2019 6:54:00 AM

Thank you..

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/31/2019 9:59:00 AM

WoW! This is romantic and very deep-end deep, SO. Your poetry is simply the best, my dear friend. Keep the cerebral lighthouse light on, 'Kay. Love and smiles and smiles of joy always.

Silent One
Date: 11/2/2019 6:56:00 AM

Thank you..

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/31/2019 7:22:00 AM

A very romantic write, SO. Love faces many challenges, yet knows no boundaries.

Silent One
Date: 11/2/2019 6:56:00 AM

You are right.. thank you..

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/30/2019 10:17:00 PM

Sometimes we move in opposite directions, yet in the same direction. All at the same time. It's very confusing indeed, for a heart in love. Your thoughts hold so many emotions. ~ Brandy

Silent One
Date: 11/2/2019 7:53:00 AM

Thank you Brandy..

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/30/2019 8:41:00 PM

Your romantic words always touch the core , nicely done Silent One

Silent One
Date: 11/2/2019 7:53:00 AM

Thank you Pixie..

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/30/2019 5:20:00 PM

As always my friend, inspiring and great poetry!!!

Silent One
Date: 11/2/2019 7:53:00 AM

Thank you..

Juliet Ligon

Date: 10/30/2019 4:47:00 PM

Coming back to read another piece of art. Sounds like a difficult predicament.

Silent One
Date: 11/2/2019 7:54:00 AM

Thank you..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/30/2019 3:11:00 PM

Two souls in limbo..hanging on to each other..much depth to your write, SO..many can relate to.

Silent One
Date: 11/2/2019 7:54:00 AM

Thank you..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/30/2019 11:33:00 AM

Just so beautiful, my friend! When we dream again of innocence and linger, not wanting to take what is longing to be given...but wanting it even the more earnestly. A lovely picture to accompany your poem. I had to linger. I don’t always want a picture as the words I want to imagine but this is a wonderful accompaniment! Fave!

Silent One
Date: 10/30/2019 2:27:00 PM

Thank you Kim.. I felt the image wasn't really part of the poem... I found it a great image..

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/30/2019 10:44:00 AM

You gotta change your phrasing my Silent friend...from "Simple Musing" to musing simply lol...great read as always...you never give in, do you? lol...your old friend...^WW^ :o)

Silent One
Date: 10/30/2019 2:28:00 PM

Simple because they are done very quickly... Thank you.