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Two Different Worlds

One face with two different smiles One floor with two different tiles One pen with two different inks One eye with two different blinks One child with different parents One sea with two different currents One smile for two different reasons One sun for two different seasons One mind with two different thoughts One crime judged in two different courts One husband with two different wives One man with two different lives One soul with two different friends One beginning with two different ends One mouth but two different words One person in two different worlds by Ndile submitted October 7th, 2009 at 2:58am

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Date: 8/22/2013 2:55:00 AM
Perfectly done Sandile, I add this poem to my faves, good job! - Alisher
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Date: 8/22/2013 3:04:00 AM
thank you Alisher
Date: 6/7/2013 10:04:00 AM
I love your one is to two life hypocrasy.
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Sandile Msane
Date: 6/10/2013 4:11:00 AM
Thanx man
Date: 2/22/2012 10:46:00 AM
This I like. Sounds like an internal battle of good v bad. Feel like I have been there in the past. God bless. Dave.
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Sandile Msane
Date: 6/12/2012 6:22:00 AM
Yes Dave a battle in which good will prevail.I'm glad it touched you, God bless you too.
Date: 2/22/2012 6:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Sandile. Love, Carol
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Sandile Msane
Date: 6/12/2012 6:21:00 AM
I'm very honoured to have my poem featured this week, thank you for comment!
Date: 2/20/2012 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem, It is well-written and I enjoyed reading it.
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Sandile Msane
Date: 6/12/2012 6:18:00 AM
Thank you very much Shirley,I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 2/20/2012 5:28:00 AM
Like the way you did this poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Sandile Msane
Date: 6/12/2012 6:17:00 AM
Thank you Anne
Date: 2/9/2012 4:51:00 PM
Dear Sadile, Thank you for your kind comment re my poem. I thoroughly enjoyed your Two Different Worlds - an interesting write! God bless, Maureen
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Sandile Msane
Date: 2/10/2012 3:20:00 AM
You're welcome, it'sjust that I really enjoyed enjoyed your poem. Im glad you enjoyed my poem too
Date: 2/9/2012 3:52:00 AM
THIS is an awesome write, I must admit! Welcome to PoetrySoup, mate! Keep inspiring! =)
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Sandile Msane
Date: 2/9/2012 4:50:00 AM
Thank you very much Glenn, your comment really means a lot to me.
Date: 2/8/2012 5:46:00 AM
Again a nice write. Sometimes it feels like we do live in two different worlds. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Sandile Msane
Date: 2/10/2012 3:22:00 AM
Thank you Lucilla, Im glad you enjoyed it

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