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Two Brothers Known As Time

One brother, not well-liked by me, is friends with early light. Born in a prior century, he measures day from night. He comes with neither fangs nor claws, and yet it makes me cringe to see him at my door because he darkens evening’s fringe. I much prefer his modern kin, who from man’s tampering, keeps coming round and round again to greet us in the spring . . . A rescuer this younger one! His middle name implies he lengthens days by helping Sun prolong light in the skies. That brother, Daylight Saving Time, the one I like the best, departs each fall. Oh, what a crime He’s not a constant guest! For the SAVING DAYLIGHT Poetry Contest of john lawless

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Date: 4/21/2015 6:52:00 PM
A creative comparison and well done on this one. Awesome my friend. love phyl
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Date: 3/2/2015 4:21:00 PM
Excellent comparison/contrast rhyming smoothly, creatively, well thought out.
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Date: 2/27/2015 10:28:00 PM
Andrea, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/24/2015 7:14:00 PM
A pleasure to read, Andrea, thank-you for sharing this.
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Date: 2/24/2015 5:44:00 PM
Congrats Andrea, a very clever take on such a wonderful theme.
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Date: 2/23/2015 7:55:00 PM
Good one Andie! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/22/2015 10:25:00 PM
Nicely done,,,,, congrats on the win. I've wrote about 5-6 the last few night. The one I wrote last night, Hopes Angels or Angels Hopes, I can't figure which one I like . Hope all is well with you. I haven't been on line about 3 weeks xo's
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Date: 2/22/2015 9:37:00 PM
Such a wonderful poem, Andrea! Very unique and imaginative presentation on this subject. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/22/2015 9:27:00 PM
Beautiful write, Andrea ,congratulations on your win. Blessings
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Date: 2/22/2015 7:05:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xxxx
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Date: 2/22/2015 6:09:00 PM
Nice win. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/22/2015 5:23:00 PM
Andrea, this poem had such a gentle lilt to it easing the rhythm and cadence into a timeless song. Thanks for being a part of this contest.
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Date: 2/16/2015 10:05:00 AM
Hi Andrea..I don't mind the clock being turned backward or forward, but I was alright too before all this started. Enjoyed your take on this theme; should do well. #7 // paul
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Date: 2/16/2015 9:41:00 AM
Good stuff. Daylight doesn't help the cold round here. It was zero all day yesterday. LOve, daver
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Date: 2/16/2015 9:04:00 AM
Worthy of a second read!
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Date: 2/15/2015 9:09:00 PM
I pay no mind to these two boys. Their game just usually annoys. But boy I will say this today. I cannot wait for the warmth of May. :) Peace. :)
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Date: 2/15/2015 3:31:00 PM
A fun read.. Loved it.
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Date: 2/15/2015 1:58:00 PM
My Valentine's day was not so hot this year. My last girlfriend dumped me. However I do have a couple of women who seem interested. Once I was dating someone an we both entered a contest and she didn't. You women are putting us men to shame! There may even be a woman President next time. Nice rhymed poem. Belated Valenitne's day greetings
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Date: 2/15/2015 9:16:00 AM
Nicely done Andrea! You have dated both brothers and have chosen well -- mother earth and father time are rejoicing .. . as I am by visiting your words this morning. Always a delight for me.
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Date: 2/14/2015 10:19:00 PM
Excellent. An entertaining write. Enjoyed. Tfs. Happy valentines day my dear
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Date: 2/14/2015 4:56:00 PM
This one has good rhythm and flow to it..Great topic..I enjoyed reading this contest entry..I am the opposite but wouldn't fuss if they would just put it in one place or the other and leave it there..Thanks for stopping by my work "I Care"..I have finished it and took it in a different way if you care to finish reading it...Sara
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Date: 2/14/2015 1:16:00 PM
a great poem Andrea love it 7 + fav hugs
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Date: 2/14/2015 1:03:00 PM
So clever and entertaining!
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Date: 2/14/2015 12:38:00 PM
The personification of time in both roles as a character adds to the fast pace set in this poem. You create magic with your words and release it to the page. Well done. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/14/2015 12:18:00 PM
Though I am not a big fan of this.....nope, I'm not going to say it....I'm not a big fan of day light savings time....but, I still enjoyed your write dear poet ! I always enjoy your writes ! Have a blessed weeking Andrea.....much love, james
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