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Twin Souls

They stood together one last time dreading what came next, having seen the path before them, having written their own text. "Being born again," she looked at him, "is scarier than dying. I fear the pain and illnesses, physicality's so trying." "And how am I to bear it," her green eyes filled with tears, "knowing I'll be half a soul for all of fifty years?" "We must be brave and live these lives and try to do no harm, so that down the road we'll meet again and you'll be in my arms." "We must try to mend our karmas, that's why we chose these paths, the suffering will be worth it for the heavenly aftermath." "I shall always feel half-empty, though I guess I won't know why," and the enormity overcame them and they both began to cry. "Have faith, my lambs," they heard God say, "for the two of you are blessed, and you' ll be reunited once you've passed your earthly tests." "And the glory will be heavenly and mystical and sweet, and you will be rewarded when you two finally meet." "You'll know a love that's boundless, as you once again are whole. Most people aren't so lucky, to share a life with their twin soul." So bravely they went forward and their memories were erased, they struggled half a century and then came face to face. It was just as God had promised, and they cherished every day, and their love-light was a beacon, and their love-light shone the way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/14/2009 2:41:00 AM
A scrumptious Quatrain...congratulations on your well deserved win in Ms. Reynold's contest! Kudos to you! Peace always, John
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Date: 2/13/2009 9:32:00 AM
Warmest congrats Danielle on your win in Kristin's contest! Amazing poetess! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/12/2009 11:40:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Kristin's contest.Danielle.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/12/2009 7:52:00 PM
Gosh this is just beautiful Danielle. Congratulations. Laurie
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Date: 2/12/2009 6:11:00 PM
Danielle congratulations on placing in Kristin's contest - Great job & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 10/18/2008 11:07:00 AM
Danielle - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on Poetry Soup! Peace always, John
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Date: 10/15/2008 6:20:00 PM
This is a very uplifting and beautiful poem that is full of hope - Congrats on it being featured this week - God Bless
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Date: 10/14/2008 7:25:00 PM
Even though this leaves me a little sad knowing I will never have this union, the writing is also so uplifting that it just fills me with warm fuzzies, Danielle for all those who would be so lucky. Congratulations on this wonderful write being featured this week!!
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Date: 10/14/2008 6:59:00 AM
I'm a bit bored of my earthly tests, I must confess, Great poem. Anthony
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Date: 10/13/2008 3:14:00 PM
Amazing poem, Danielle, ! Perfect poem to be featured! ~Carrie
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Date: 10/13/2008 6:44:00 AM
This was outstanding. Congratulations Danielle on "Twin Souls" being featured. Hey, Keep me in your prayers, I might be voting for a liberal. Have a wonderful day. Vince
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Date: 10/13/2008 5:32:00 AM
Congrats Danielle on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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