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twilight's eruption in skies of tangerine . . . samurai shadows

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/17/2018 6:28:00 PM

Lovely, Andrea. A beauty.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/8/2017 3:44:00 PM

Lovey haiku, Andrea! Congrats on your win. Janice

John Lawless

Date: 6/8/2017 3:09:00 PM

Love this one.....

Moon Flower

Date: 6/7/2017 1:03:00 AM

Such a cool imagery you used here, Andrea. A breathtaking piece. Congrats! ;)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/16/2016 8:23:00 PM

Hi Andrea, i do Love Haiku. I like them much more when they are well written and have style. As your Haiku is an excellent piece it ticks all the boxes. A seven and into my faves it goes Andrea. BRAVO!!!! A belated congratulations to you on the win Andrea....Vlad.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/11/2016 11:50:00 AM

Fabuloussssssssssssss win my friend:-) hugs jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 2/10/2016 1:31:00 PM

stealthily seizing the top spot......Bravo!!

Paul Callus

Date: 2/10/2016 12:56:00 PM

This is excellent, Andrea! Somehow I missed reading this one before; I also was thinking on Japanese lines, but diverted my attention to city smog! Congratulations on a merited first place! // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/10/2016 8:20:00 AM

Very nice, Andrea. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/10/2016 4:07:00 AM

Oh wow Andrea amazing haiku dear... congrats on top podium!!

Judy Konos

Date: 2/10/2016 3:17:00 AM

Andrea Dietrich...You are so "KQQL"

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/10/2016 12:09:00 AM

Andrea, Congrats on your "Haiku 101" win. LINDA

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/9/2016 11:44:00 PM

I love this! Excellent haiku. Congratulations on win! A 7

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/9/2016 11:05:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS!!!! I loved this one Andrea. So happy to see it in the top spot! #7

Nathan D.

Date: 2/9/2016 9:04:00 PM

nice

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/7/2016 4:40:00 PM

OOoh I love this one! The language is so fresh ... tangerine sky, samurai shadows. And you've a tipped a hat to the Japanese tradition by taking about samurais!

Thomas Martin

Date: 2/4/2016 2:01:00 PM

Almos never read haiku here at soup, but you did very well!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/4/2016 8:20:00 AM

Best of luck in the contest.

James Inman

Date: 2/3/2016 9:19:00 PM

Nice Andrea.

Daver Austin

Date: 2/3/2016 1:08:00 PM

Delicious and exotic with Japanese flavor. Love those shadows. My book is nearly finished, then I can get caught up. Love daver

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/3/2016 8:33:00 AM

WoW! Marvelous dear Andrea!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/2/2016 4:07:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Very descriptive of the picture that we are suppose to use for the entry..I enjoyed reading it.Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara

Jennifer Walker

Date: 2/2/2016 9:41:00 AM

Love this visual you've created.

Viv Wigley

Date: 2/2/2016 12:02:00 AM

Hugely descriptive Haiku, Andrea, love it. Viv x

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/1/2016 7:40:00 PM

Magnificent portrait painted here in this lovely haiku! I can't begin to touch this:-)! Pandita