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Twilight Float

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Twilight Float


  Fishermen's  boat,
   Frosts  them  coat  blue;
     Mists  float  twilight.
       Drooping  skies  sweep
          On  wings  deep waves;  
              Now  sleep  our  men.
                    Ocean's  heart  swells,
                       In  wind  dwells  night;
                              Tales  tells  cold  sea.


For nette's contest "THAN-BAUK A TWILIGHT"
by gautami phookan

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  1. Date: 9/16/2012 3:21:00 AM
    enjoyyed this!

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 4:39:00 AM
    Hi Gautami - Love the phrasing, imagery and the form. Poem itself seems to be floating. - Gail

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 6:47:00 PM
    YOu did a good job with this because even for a native English user, I think it's a difficult form and it's lovely how how you made a very nice message with this short form!

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 12:06:00 AM
    Gautami, hi! Hope you got my e-mail... this is awesome.. never done the form... you sure make me want to try... love your ending...always..pd

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 7:29:00 AM
    A beautiful image in your Than-Bauk. Best of luck with this poem in the contest.