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True Love's What It Seems

Whispers, carried by the wind, on their way Lullaby's so softly sung, to be heard Listen close, dissect every note I play Feel my heart beating fast between each word Remember our first days holding my hand Frolicking freely in that hidden cove Running wild, barefoot in the pure white sand Finding you, a lost gem, a treasure trove The summer of lovers went by so fast Days turning into nights then days again How we wished those times forever would last Time, commitment, drifts away on a plane Come fly back to me, to the land of dreams Where life's simple and true love's what it seems

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/7/2015 7:09:00 AM
Moments like these adorn our life for ever! Idyllic setting and images that add to your poem grandeur, dear Tim!
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Date: 10/6/2015 11:30:00 PM
A wonderful poem Tim... Love LINDA
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Date: 10/6/2015 8:12:00 PM
Very nice sonnet Tim. I hope she flies back.
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Date: 10/6/2015 7:09:00 PM
what a wonderful love sonnet, Tim. Not your usual style but it came out quite good!
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Date: 10/6/2015 3:13:00 PM
What lovely imagery Tim - sounds absolutely idyllic :-) hugs Jan xx
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