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Awakening morning darkness falls heavy clouds walking outside stretching in deep thought Firstly alone dreaming in freedom love Looking into the mountains a prayer Faraway winds howling cry out snow capped peaks cold reminder a silver chain running down the face The truth always shines its light in the end Heavy rains wet upon the brow why has life been so cruel to me I never chose this path holding no demons condemned in lies with pain and suffering All one showed was the face of good even helping people in the streets who almost destroyed my home I had forgiven everyone as God is my witness D-day looms heavy the Devil spits his lies yet sitting on his fork one will find truth How could another human be so vile To condemn someone on a story that has just been made up never have I stolen from anyone in my life in fact the opposite money root of evil I see Living humble and meek has taught me wisdom of my ways nature talks to me in winds whispering Some walk this earth to be persecuted in the wrong Proof that justice sometimes fails the innocence we all are sinners looking down at the cold face chiseled in truth but to bear falsely on someone Somethings I will never understand You saved me Almighty Lord When tortured pleaded in your Heavenly name Saved my family from Hell A miracle of life you gave back to me I began writing expelling my demons Now judgement day is falling upon me Oh Heavenly Father save me in my innocence And the tears keep falling for the love of truth what is wrong with this world sometimes they are bind to the facts

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Date: 2/16/2015 12:42:00 PM
This is beautiful and nicely crafted. Thanks for the share... Sometimes its refreshing visiting old poems of soupers... Its amazing, the freshness which comes from doing this... And that is exactly my enjoyment visiting this piece
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Date: 1/5/2015 1:45:00 AM
I can't imagine the trials that you went through, but what a load off your chest it must be to let it all out, onto the page. We all have our own struggles, some greater and some lesser, but in the end, if we remained faithful through perseverance, we get the same reward. Hold onto that love of truth and stay strong, my friend.
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Date: 12/18/2014 5:03:00 PM
An amazing write, A fav for me!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/20/2014 12:40:00 AM
thank you maurice for the heartfelt beautiful comment bless you
Date: 12/17/2014 6:07:00 AM
Well crafted deep spiritual reflective write old pal..
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/17/2014 5:33:00 PM
you know me well enough ken this is a battle i have to face down the demon deceiver of lies this is big for me it has brought me to my knees feeling broken at christmas i will light a candle praying in the infants grace bless you always dear pal
Date: 12/16/2014 6:57:00 AM
a fave!!!! just a tremendous write!!! like it much.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/17/2014 5:28:00 PM
thank you so much olive so sweet of you dear friend bless you
Date: 12/16/2014 1:03:00 AM
- A touching poem, from your soul and your heart, dear Liam - Beautiful written ...... but, a little sad - Have a nice day with a smile on your mouth :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/17/2014 5:21:00 PM
its a real sad time for me another christmas praying to the infant child that they have mercy in me and see my innocence thank you kindly anne lise for making me smile heartfelt beautiful comment you have a beautiful evening dear friend bless you
Date: 12/15/2014 5:33:00 PM
Liam My Mate!! Most excellent write indeed. This one will go down in the Leprechaun File of serious, sad, and steadfast poetry. I can sum it up in one word: Brilliant!! Best Always, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/17/2014 5:11:00 PM
thank you gary dear friend always a pleasure seeing you wonderful heartfelt comment for sure in the sad leprechaun file lol very sad i think awaiting happiness i smile in christmas light bless you pal
Date: 12/15/2014 11:12:00 AM
He hears, Liam. Be of good courage. My heart aches for you in your suffering. I wish that I could somehow be of help. Be strong and of good courage. He will never forsake you. Sometimes the innocent suffer. Wasn't that the way with Christ himself? He will help you bear it. Sending my warm hugs.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/17/2014 5:06:00 PM
your a pal eileen he has never forsaken me even in my darkest hours his light always shone his eyes are wise to the truth in the end so my suffering bears on the fruit of innocence such a comfort to the heart thank you dear friend bless you
Date: 12/15/2014 8:13:00 AM
So sad and heavy heart I feel my dearest friend Liam,reading your desperate plea to God for His help and justice. He hears you!Be yourself and walk with truth you know, eyes and heart focus always on the Lord. He knows your pure heart and suffering He'll reward.Evil doers God shall smite! Believe truth will find its way and fly you will free and clear from all this hellish evil. Evil doers the Lord knows!May you feel God 's love and warmth giving you His strentgh and protection and that of His angels too. I'll be praying and cheering for you safety too. Good luck tomorrow! Remember God is with you! I wish you all the best of the best Liam! keep the faith be positive and keep all your dreams! :) Love and hugs! Xxoxxox D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/17/2014 5:00:00 PM
its very sad when you know the truth always prevails in the end council the all seeing eye our creator wonderful comment dear pal will tomorrow ever come thank you kindly dorian bless you
Date: 12/15/2014 5:07:00 AM
What a cry of desperation! What a passion for the truth! " Much preferable to suffer injustice than to commit it!" Socrates, Greek philosopher, 469-399 BC. My friend, Liam, if you only knew how many poems I have devoted to this subject! Be yourself and remain close to God. Bad people are many and few the good ones! Stay steadfast to your ethics and you will be rewarded! Monumental piece of a writing! A seven!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/15/2014 9:36:00 AM
well demetrios demanding a lie detector test if comes to the worst case senario to prove my innocence pointing the finger the guilty party lol armed robbery with a knife never ever carried one in my life what a joke i just laugh how sad some people are to make up lying stories oh when my books finished they could make a movie on it your a pal bless you dear friend gods on my side no matter which way it goes

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