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True Beauty

Mother's hands On her infant's face Soothing hurts With cherishing grace Righting wrongs Back into place Such loving acts Are True Beauty Lending a shoulder On which to cry Encouraging tots To give one more try Hugs when you don't Have the answer why Such loving acts Are True Beauty Pinning up hair For the dance rehearsals Playing the game of mom/kid reversal Balming the wounds When gossip is personal Such loving acts Are True Beauty Seeing her choose Her life-long partner Giving her up At the wedding altar Knowing your love Shall never falter Such eternal love Is True Beauty Written by Donna Golden, January 5, 2009 Inspired by Deborah Guzzi's contest, The Beauty Way

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Date: 8/15/2009 7:10:00 PM
Just beautiful sums this lovely poem, and truly written by a Golden Delicious, Bravo girl>>James
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Date: 1/23/2009 9:06:00 PM
Wonderful, Donna. This poem encompasses a mother's genuine instinct - love, reassurance, hope and nurturing. Poignantly penned. peace always, John
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Date: 1/18/2009 10:52:00 AM
Last one will be a tough one for me but I'll survive. After 4 brothers, 3 brothers in law, 3 sons and finally Daddy's little girl, it will be emotional. Luckily I love the young man like a son. God Bl;ess. Vince
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Date: 1/14/2009 11:40:00 PM
Simply beautiful! Well constructed and expressed... Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/8/2009 12:31:00 PM
girls are great. and this piece is a fine rendition of that fact. thank you for your comment. john
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Date: 1/7/2009 5:27:00 PM
Tribute to mothers everywhere. Love the last stanza. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Karen
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Date: 1/7/2009 5:46:00 AM
Great job. These are certainly acts of true beauty and moments we do all cherish. Great write and Continue to share.
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Date: 1/6/2009 12:48:00 AM
Donna , this piece is a " true beauty " , about a real beautiful truth . You have said it in perfect rhyming sequence . Best of luck in the contest .... I think it's a winner .... Tks for your kind words ...
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Date: 1/5/2009 10:51:00 PM
...don't worry about the category... you'll learn. Besides, if I'm unsure, I lump most of mine just under VERSE! K.
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Date: 1/5/2009 10:33:00 PM
Please read 'A Woman's Worth.' I know my place! K.
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Date: 1/5/2009 10:18:00 PM
Carefully crafted with sweet rhymes and a lovely flow... an honour and a pleasure to read and review. Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/5/2009 11:39:00 AM
What a picture you have created of love and true beauty. This is a beautiful piece of work,
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Date: 1/5/2009 11:02:00 AM
Truely beautiful...and a wonderful entry in the Beauty Way contest! Good luck, Donna! Well done ~ Carrie
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