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Trip of Life

Old Age: Life’s last station Before The final destination Of A wondrous ride! © Demetrios Trifiatis 10 January 2016

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Bl Devnath

Date: 1/13/2016 12:25:00 PM

Beautiful riding of life to last station of old age bears many circumstantial necessary things. Wealth's there but health's not good, health's good but problem from other ways are there, then smooth riding on life becomes difficult. Very nice practical poem, visionary and philosophical both. Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/13/2016 1:30:00 PM

Thank you, BL, for your wonderful visit and the beautiful analysis! May God keep you always healthy!

Edward Ebbs

Date: 1/10/2016 10:10:00 PM

You made me smile :) Thank you :)

Edward Ebbs
Date: 1/11/2016 7:15:00 AM

I do not know Demetrios, I have problems remembering where I last placed my car keys at times, but if I could remember this poem in 40 years, I would be smiling for sure :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/11/2016 4:09:00 AM

Good! Remember this poem in forty years and then, if you are still smiling, would mean you had a great ride! Thank you my dear friend for your visit! Keep smiling!

Tim Smith

Date: 1/10/2016 7:47:00 PM

Enjoy the ride. It has some great views.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/11/2016 12:35:00 AM

You too... young, my friend Tim! First you make your acquaintance with the old lady and then we talk! Ha-ha! Thank you for visiting and commenting!

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/10/2016 4:36:00 PM

Demetrios, you have penned a well written piece. I think the attitude that you have is what makes the ride enjoyable. However, that's my opinion.Thanks for sharing-Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/10/2016 5:24:00 PM

Every opinion counts my, dear Alexis! Yes, among other things attitude is a very important element but there are other factors as well, for instance, health, education, achievements and so on. Thank you for visiting and commenting in such constructive way!

Legendary Legend

Date: 1/10/2016 8:24:00 AM

awesome......

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/10/2016 12:05:00 PM

Dearest Legendary Legend, you are so gracious. Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/10/2016 7:56:00 AM

- It's about enjoying ...... live each day, dear friend Demetrios :) - No one knows when "the fairy tale" ends - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/10/2016 12:07:00 PM

A trip is always enjoying the ride not the destination dear Anne-Lise! Thank you for your precious visit dear Anne-Lise. Hugs

White Sage

Date: 1/10/2016 7:29:00 AM

well written Demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/10/2016 12:07:00 PM

Thank you, W.S.!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/10/2016 4:37:00 AM

My dear poet...You are a wonderful man who makes the trip pleasant for all others. Filakia

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/10/2016 12:13:00 PM

Old age teaches those who are willing to learn! What matters is to love your fellow humans, as our Lord has taught us! Thank you dearest poetess for your loving heart!