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Treasure Quest

He dug deep into the soil Trying to find the hidden treasure Gold Silver Jewels Here would be the answer Dreams realized Respect Admiration Power Deep in a hole Pile of earth stacked above him heart racing Sweat pouring from forehead Blisters blooming on palms Dig Dig Dig Feel of metal to metal Ecstasy Elation Realization On hands and knees Pulling Grabbing Clinging Box top released Mind screams Voice caught in throat Ghastly smile Skeletal hand grabs on Treasure long gone Up above is a laugh A trap eloquently crafted Soil pushed on top This is where The bodies are buried A specter walks along the top With treasure map in hand Thankful for Another foolish man Locked under a pile of earth and sand The mans identity is assumed Spirit to flesh from earth exhumed Perhaps he's gained Another fifty years Not to worry Time he does not fear Mens greed Always leads them here

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/19/2015 7:37:00 AM
oOoh...a great story! A ghost hunter...awesome:)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/19/2015 10:13:00 AM
Thanks again Casarah.
Date: 7/3/2013 5:56:00 AM
I don t know why this poem made me think of a pirate in search for a treasure..I continued reading and realized there was more to it than that.Greediness is humans worst enemy..till humans realize that lfe is so very short and If one lkeeps digging ..one might not have the spare time to appreciate those real special treasures money can t buy.An excellent poem Richard : )
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Date: 7/1/2013 6:14:00 PM
Richard; this is a very good poem. Greed is never good - at the people lose. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/1/2013 6:16:00 PM
Thanks for your visit Luccila
Date: 7/1/2013 11:49:00 AM
Oh....this one spooked me, Richard. I don't do well with spooky things! Great write, though. Great lesson. Read all your lovely posts and responded to all. Happy Canada Day!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/1/2013 12:58:00 PM
Thanks we have a wonderful sunny day.
Date: 7/1/2013 10:47:00 AM
Soup mail.Have a great day.Colleen
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/1/2013 12:58:00 PM
Responded to soup mail.
Date: 7/1/2013 9:31:00 AM
Loved this one Richard!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/1/2013 12:58:00 PM
Thanks Arthur.
Date: 7/1/2013 8:50:00 AM
HOW TRUE! If only the fools could listen! Great poem! PS: HAPPY CANADA DAY! I am so happy Canada is my adapted country!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/1/2013 12:59:00 PM
Thanks, we have a great day to celebrate.

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