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The air is breezy, the night is silently resting under a moonless sky. Incense burns strong but on this night; the scent was like faint words to an untrained ear. No Moon to gaze upon, nothing to offer condolence. And just as discontent quickly enters, it leaves. The wind rises,temporarily transposing all thoughts rational, all things not rooted, all things unclear. A moment in chaos passes quickly but the memory cannot be repressed, appreciated. The clouds, gone with the wind. The moon; once hidden, illuminates. The scent of vanilla filled the cosmos and the song retold creation A melody in which the beautiful voice perplexes the laws of science. The song that exalted Kings and crowned Queens played until the Sun silenced him dead.

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Date: 11/30/2008 8:21:00 AM
Ty - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/29/2008 7:50:00 PM
TY - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 11/18/2008 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 8:12:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/20/2008 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your interesting take of poetry this week! Good luck with all your poetry, and continue the good work! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/20/2008 4:25:00 AM
Congrat on this selection. I like your transcendental effort....There are as many views as people alive on earth. Very imaginative writing. Love, daver
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Date: 10/19/2008 9:58:00 PM
Congrats on having your poetry featured this week Ty- God Bless
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Date: 10/19/2008 3:53:00 PM
Congratulations Ty on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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