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Transcendental

He enters into a deep trance The soft music nudges him on A lucid dreamer he is now He gains transcendence A soul travellor he is now The secrets time and space His to master his to explore He has a taste of the divine He is jolted back to our ream His skin tingling with static

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Date: 7/24/2016 6:44:00 AM
A deep, divine, spiritual verse.... Keep the poems flowing bro!! ;-)
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Lewis Nyaga
Date: 7/26/2016 1:37:00 AM
Thank you bro Teddy.. and i sure will keep the flow on ;-)
Date: 7/2/2016 4:56:00 AM
Inner knowledge starts with the purification of the soul! Impressive writing dear, Lewis!
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Lewis Nyaga
Date: 7/5/2016 2:19:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios, for the insightful comment and the appreciation.. ;-)
Date: 7/2/2016 4:28:00 AM
Very nice look into the mental and emotional process of seeking pleasure. I like how you brought him back to reality. Nicely written. Jesse
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Lewis Nyaga
Date: 7/5/2016 2:17:00 AM
Thank you Jesse, for reading my poem and the nice comment//blessings
Date: 7/2/2016 2:34:00 AM
Lol are u going on me ? ol Nice write
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Lewis Nyaga
Date: 7/2/2016 2:44:00 AM
Thank you Justin.. may be we connected on the transcendental plane.. ;-)
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Justin Worthy
Date: 7/2/2016 2:35:00 AM
Spying* not going.. tlmy bad that sounded wrong...

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