Tranquil

Windows creaking while cold whistling winds blow.. Snowflakes falling gracefully from the deep dark sky.. The intricate designs of snowflakes everywhere.. Formed a blanket of pure white snow on the ground.. A representation of intense innocence.. A winter wonderland of beautiful.. So tranquil.... Outside of a window.. One gazes at the wonderous miracle of Mother Nature.. Inside a warm cabin.. There is solitude.. A tranquil combustion of inner peace.. The crackling sound of the fire while sitting by the fireplace A fresh woodsy scent hitting one's nostrils.. Contentment arises.. As serenity fills the air.. Curled up in a cozy cabin in a sacret forest.. Solitude brings forth comfort followed by gratitude..

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/23/2019 12:05:00 PM

You are wonderful observer of beauty and nature, your poetry tells a beautiful story of both, xo

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/10/2019 11:20:00 AM

I could just envision myself relaxing by a a cozy fireplace in a wooded cabin as I read your most excellent poem, Robertina! Beautifully written and enjoyed! :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/9/2019 12:18:00 AM

Peaceful atmosphere enchanting the soul dearest, Robertina! Excellently written!

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/8/2019 1:46:00 PM

Oh yes, I am completed captivated and moved by your splendid poem, Robertina. I love the spiritual tone and the appreciation your poem so beautifully expresses, and, I especially love your last lovely line.. your talent shines as brightly as the crackling fire, my dear friend. Such wonderful emotion and artistry! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Robertina B.
Date: 4/8/2019 5:33:00 PM

Thank you so much for your wonderful words and support, Sweet Susan.. So happy you enjoyed!! Always a great pleasure to hear from you, dear friend.. Have a blessed evening!