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Touched By Your Flame

I watched them gather round The warmth of your flame Like campers at campfire time Huddling close to you Pushing and jostling For the best place I saw your warmth Dancing off their faces Small cinders escaping into the night I followed the sparks drifting up On the chilly breeze Riding high…disappearing into the stars I was cold I was alone On the edge And yet…I dared not go near you Though your light invited me And I wanted so much to be warmed By you Yet….how could I find a place By those encircling you Watching the mesmerizing display Of your orange and yellow flames There was no place Among the gathering of.... The strong, the beautiful, the insistent So, on the outskirts I stayed Tears trickling down my cheeks Cold Alone… I waited…I held back Until they all left One by one Some bumping into me Not even aware that I was alive I waited until you had almost died out No longer on display But a warm glow of embers Still orange and glowing with desire And I approached Shyly… Longingly… Needing to see you dance For me….only for me And I coaxed you In my clumsy way My fingers cold My heart ablaze Suddenly....you burst into flame A pillar of fire Miracle of love For I had not added any kindling But my little heart And yet it seems you had waited Knowing I would come And my slightest touch Made the flames spring to life Voracious flames Flames reaching the high heavens Your heat overpowering Consuming I almost threw myself into you Wanting to reach the center Of the heat and warmth Of your beauty… I spent the night Out under the stars Lying naked Yet not cold Naked Yet not ashamed Naked Yet not shy For your glow was my covering I let myself be touched Time and again By licking fingers of fire By the burning flames of your desire For….ME! For Gail's Contest Touched by Your Flame May 27, 2013

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Date: 8/14/2014 9:38:00 AM
Oh wow! I had to say you're very good Eileen. There is so much powerful words into that mind of yours. Bravo! LoveLots, Ara
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Date: 7/5/2014 11:12:00 PM
Your romanticism is so sweet it makes me weep.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/5/2014 11:15:00 PM
What a sweet compliment! Thank you!
Date: 6/27/2014 10:47:00 AM
A dream night--with a dream girl. Could anything be more perfect?
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Robert Ludden
Date: 6/27/2014 11:03:00 AM
it fits you
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/27/2014 10:58:00 AM
Robert, thank you for your sweet post. I need encouragement tonight. This came at the right time.
Date: 5/13/2014 12:35:00 PM
How consumingly delicious--to have a lover like the girl in the poem. I hope she speaks for you--one of the most attractive things I have read--and drooled over. :-) I'd happily trade places with the source of the flames. What a night!
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Robert Ludden
Date: 5/13/2014 12:50:00 PM
I'll be sure to look them up. Hungrily, Dean
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/13/2014 12:43:00 PM
Oh WOW! This is some post! :) Thank you for visiting my work, Robert. This did very well on the top poems list. Stayed at number 3 for some time. If you drool...you'll put out the fire! ;) Take care! I have many poems that would suit your fancy...Don't have time to enumerate them all, but perhaps visit the Confessional Booth on Fire...or...The Journey of Your lips, or Make love to Me, just to name a few. Take care.
Date: 9/30/2013 8:21:00 PM
Hi Eileen, An amorous write with passion...Thanks for sharing this one and for your visit to my verse.. Ken
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Date: 6/15/2013 10:12:00 AM
Eileen, such a captivating poem with powerful metaphoric lines. I am simply amazed by the way you take the reader through this relationship from reluctance in the beginning into the full on heat at the end. Spectacular imagery. :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/15/2013 10:15:00 AM
Oh! Thank you, Karen! You have brought a full on smile to my face! So kind of you to visit and post. :)
Date: 6/6/2013 8:57:00 PM
Hi Eileen, congratulation in Gail's "touching flame" contest... xox~ LINDA
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/6/2013 8:59:00 PM
Thanks, Linda....lovely to hear from you! :)
Date: 6/5/2013 2:23:00 AM
well done and congrats Eileen ...Seren
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/5/2013 2:43:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it, Seren. :)
Date: 6/4/2013 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning place Eileen love xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/5/2013 2:43:00 AM
Thanks, Mandy! Sweet of you to post! :)
Date: 5/30/2013 10:20:00 AM
Watch out Eileen...you're liable to catch something on fire with this one. You have such passion...its always there in one way or another. I also wanted to say hi and take care of your lovely self if you don't hear from me for awhile...running circles here! But i hope to be able to stop in some...and post some too. Gotta run...Bye, bye!....Caleb
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Painted Hunter
Date: 5/30/2013 10:22:00 AM
Ha...just read Becca's comment...she feels your passion too....Queen of Passion..;)
Date: 5/29/2013 10:33:00 PM
It sounds corny, but I wanna say, "This was smoking!". What a creative story you have painted... I liked how you portrayed yourself as a shy little mouse a-midst all the beautiful people... when in the end the flames were wanting you all along. Very well written!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/29/2013 10:42:00 PM
Yea...he was just doing his dance to capture my attention! ;) Poetically speaking, that is! Hope all is well with you, Timothy! :) Thanks for your visits....they really are wonderful.
Date: 5/28/2013 1:31:00 AM
another wonderful write from you Eileen xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/29/2013 9:49:00 PM
Awwwww Mandy! I'm touched! XOXOXO
Date: 5/27/2013 11:29:00 PM
Excellent. Beautiful poem. Very deep writing. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/29/2013 9:50:00 PM
Thanks, Ravi. Beautiful is a great adjective. It made me happy! :)
Date: 5/27/2013 7:06:00 PM
Nice Poem. I'll add as favorite. :3
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Nato Calubiran
Date: 5/27/2013 8:36:00 PM
even though im not the sentimental/loving type. well i liked it anyways
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/27/2013 7:42:00 PM
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it enough to do that! :)
Date: 5/27/2013 5:57:00 PM
Oh my Goodness this is off the hook and beautiful. You out did yourself with this one. Kim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/27/2013 7:43:00 PM
Thanks, Kim....I was wondering what to write and then I remembered campfire days and my fascination with the fire...the rest just flowed! :)
Date: 5/27/2013 3:40:00 PM
WOW Eileen, this is a wildfire write, exceptional metaphor use. Have often witnessed this situation unfold. Excellent poem. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/27/2013 7:44:00 PM
Wildfire....I like that, Richard. You are always so kind...I appreciate you visits!
Date: 5/27/2013 3:27:00 PM
Explosive write, Queen of Passion. Off to faves for sure. Hey, this sizzler is the best entry I've seen thus far. Good luck, Eileen. Licia :-)
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Delysia Hendricks
Date: 5/31/2013 2:02:00 PM
Of course you may. You've earned it. I don't put too much score by placements in contests. Taste differs, after all. No mind where you're placed, if at all, because this is worth a double 7. Happy writing, my friend. Licia :-)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/27/2013 7:46:00 PM
Wow!!! Can I keep that title? Queen of Passion! :) Well, Licia...thanks for the vote of confidence. I am sometimes surprised by the good reviews I get and then poor placement in the contest, so...I try not to get my hopes up! If you liked it...I'm HAPPY! :)
Date: 5/27/2013 2:31:00 PM
you are the queen of the poem of passion, my friend! this one is amazing!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/27/2013 7:47:00 PM
Thanks, Ilene. I'm so happy to read this lovely post! :) You are amazing!
Date: 5/27/2013 12:59:00 PM
Wow, this is spectacular, another for my favorites. Simply beautiful!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/15/2013 10:14:00 AM
And I'm so so grateful that you do, Richard! In fact, when you don't...something is wrong with my day! Ain't that the truth! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2013 8:56:00 AM
I'm confused! I visit you every day.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/27/2013 1:20:00 PM
Richard....you're back! Missed your visits. Thanks for the lovely comment! Hugs

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