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Touch Me-Monday

NO! Not now Damn alarm Feel like crying Another Monday I have to go to work And still feeling so confused Look at all those freaking stop lights Touch me, tell me I am not dreaming Will one of you damn lights turn green today It's rush hour? How come we are not moving Touch me again. With a baseball bat Take me away from this nightmare A tropical island please I’ll touch that alarm clock With a large hammer No more Mondays Feel better? Feel good? YES! Vince Suzadail Jr For Nette Onclaud's Touch me count -up and down contest

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Akash Yadav

Date: 8/24/2011 5:13:00 AM

this is a great write... I wish you all the best for future...sincerely, akash.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/28/2011 11:07:00 AM

I think we all could visualize ourselves in this situation Vince. No more Mondays would be great. love phyl

Judy Ball

Date: 7/28/2011 12:55:00 AM

Been theere and done that. Looking forward to retirement. Very good feeling in this. Love the imagery. I could see myself in your words. A good write. God Bless, JB

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 6/8/2011 6:12:00 PM

Sounds alot like my commutes, Vince. excellent Etheree . Thanks fo your comment on my poem.

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 5/30/2011 1:18:00 PM

A superb Etheree - a great write. It is always so rewarding to read your well articulated poems. Thanks for your encouraging comments on my poem Mother. I missed the Mother's Day Contest. -Mohammad

James Fraser

Date: 5/1/2011 7:52:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win in Nette's fine contest Vince. Have a lovely Sunday....:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/29/2011 11:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Vince in Nette's contest. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 4/28/2011 10:42:00 PM

Definitely FIRST PLACE! Win. Many congrats, Lainie

Emma Buckeridge

Date: 4/28/2011 9:00:00 PM

Congratulations on the big win! Great poem, I sure feel like this on a Monday morning. Well done.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/28/2011 5:41:00 PM

LOL, yup, me and road rage, I hear ya! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Kash Poet

Date: 4/28/2011 10:37:00 AM

Just Excellent!!Congrats on your 1st place win,Vince--kash

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 4/28/2011 10:30:00 AM

Oh, Vince, you've spoken my mind :) This is seriously funny!!! I hate Mondays too. Who doesn't? You are an excellent poet/writer!!! Congrats on your bIG win! Love, iolanda

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/28/2011 10:26:00 AM

Excellent write on 'bad' Mondays. Congrats on your 1st place win. liked this one..gautami

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/28/2011 9:36:00 AM

great job , congrats on your first place win

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/28/2011 9:32:00 AM

Wish I could send you a "tropical island," Vince. There are alarm clocks (with padding) that you can throw against a wall to make them stop ringing. Maybe for your next birthday... Excellent work! Congratulations on taking the top spot in Nette's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/28/2011 4:34:00 AM

Congrats Vince on your first place win in Nette's contest with this exquisite entry my friend... a lovely lilting piece of poetry ..enjoy your top spot for a top notch poem..luv..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/28/2011 12:23:00 AM

I started to write for this contest and took a similar angle...u have some serious hatred for Mondays, don't you? Hilarious write! Congrats on your first place win! Gwendolen

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/27/2011 10:51:00 PM

Oh this one is so cool, Vince ^_^ you got me smiling a lot here, and I really liked how you did yours, starting with No! & ending with Yes! Very witty etheree on Monday ^_^ Super congrats on your 1st place win ^_^ --- btw-- can you pls tell me the title of your stream write? Thank you :D

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 4/27/2011 7:39:00 PM

Excellent. Congrats on a great write.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/27/2011 6:50:00 PM

My goodness Vince you hate Mondays much more than I do. But then I am retired. Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce

John Freeman

Date: 4/27/2011 6:37:00 PM

Congratulation Vince on first place. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/27/2011 5:22:00 PM

Hooray...this was a favorite of mine! So glad to see it is number 1 !! Congrats Vince!! well deserved!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2011 5:18:00 PM

vince, this is awesome. One of the few I have read on the subject of Monday. The worst day of the week for me and I too feel just like you about it. Congratulations. Great humor shining thru.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/23/2011 1:02:00 AM

Wow! Sounds like.Friday... that's the.only day I dread to get up.. and move around... and I hear ya on them stop lights... enjoyed your poem... take.care...p.d.

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/20/2011 6:40:00 PM

Sooo many folks will relate to this one!! Better have another cup of coffee, Vince!! You'll need it!! LOL !!