Too Little

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TOO LITTLE

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN THIS MORNING BY ME, (c)

Wonder not for the state our world is in when we are doing too little its many ills to cure! (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 27 July 2016

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 7/28/2016 6:04:00 PM

As Tim said faith is the answer. Beautifully written.

Tim Smith

Date: 7/27/2016 12:36:00 PM

Yes, I agree we all have some faults we can change in ourselves. That is the hardest part but it can be done if we have faith.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/28/2016 6:46:00 AM

Yes, it could be done if we have faith and will! Thank you my friend Timotheos for your lovely visit and comment!

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/27/2016 10:54:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, I agree, we are all apart of one big family. The "human race". But many are two blind to see that. As always excellent piece-7:-) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/28/2016 6:47:00 AM

Yes, they are too blind my good friend, Alexis! Thank you so much for your delightful visit and comment!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/27/2016 5:03:00 AM

- Money (big money) .... politics ..... power ...... !!! - Great written, a theme that makes me sad dear friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/27/2016 7:47:00 AM

It seems that we all participate in a degree to the ills of the world! Only when we find a way to minimize our participation things will get better! Thank you dearest, Anne-Lise for your gracious visit and comment!