Get Your Premium Membership

Toilet Bowl Committee

Toilet Bowl Committee (aka: Uptown Hood) A lavatory confinement my$h!tdontstinkcomode.com --- If you want to moderate this place, pick up the pace From the mouth down to the @$$ Your so called kind has no class, Fed by these political rejects, never elected for what was! No matter, They wipe their assets clean with our dreams Forgetting to wipe their own toilet seats clean Trying to make us feel dirtier than scat Feeding off our paper when their toilet bowl water level is low Toilet bowl PO-poes, wiping without dental floss Missing everything in between reality Trying to be kind, saying "One Day We'll Be Good Enough!" Offering their Golden Plunger, straight from the Home Depot shelves No Thank You! My plunger a true gift from Mr. Wal-Mart himself Next time you feel the need to offer a reference point Please caption your name when you drop by, Rinse thoroughly when speaking my name, Then I will listen when you talk civilized Correct my punctuations and spelling errors The weakest trait you wear You are no Prophet, just white tissue turning brown Your Justification comes from old dry grapes falling from the vines Ridicule will never give you the respect, for what you are! We, the few poets from the hood, overpower any change you offer Goodwill Crumbling and flushing what does not meet your standards Trying hard to force feed us soup, without giving us bibs Thank you Toilet Bowl Committee For clogging up my drain with your bull$h!T By: Keeping it Real (The Downtown Hood) Date: 12-15-13 ~*~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

12345
Date: 6/23/2016 7:52:00 PM
haha, this funny one again. and where is this Mortician poem? I can't find it!!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/26/2016 6:12:00 AM
Love it...seems all needed to hold a political office is a B.S. in BS!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/23/2016 7:08:00 AM
Very nice sarcastic on politicians this unknown comic slap is better lesson for them i like this writing style too much
Login to Reply
Date: 1/4/2016 11:23:00 AM
Well put. So true of this day and age. Always out for themselves and $h!t on everyone else...well done. Look forward to reading more of your work soon. X
Login to Reply
Date: 9/16/2015 4:33:00 PM
I don't know much about poetry. I suppose that's why I am here. I have always found it pretentious and some what unrealistic, until now. I am drawn to it with a need to understand and feel the emotion in each piece whether I enjoy it or not and that's hard! I have been reading for days and your poems are of the few that I really seem to enjoy. In that I'm inspired to learn more and give poetry a second chance. I feel my love for this art growing and I appreciate your style and realism.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/26/2015 10:15:00 AM
Congrats on your win - no plunger needed! .... George
Login to Reply
Date: 8/23/2015 12:45:00 PM
whoa...awesome metaphors...I may have missed out on the details but I get the general idea...congrats on your Screwed V win, SKAT!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/20/2015 1:04:00 AM
Love ur unique take Skat... congrats on big win!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/19/2015 1:54:00 AM
Thank you so much ROB..... SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 6/12/2015 12:16:00 AM
Just here to say hello, Skat! Waiting for a new poem to come up from you!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/3/2015 7:03:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this Scat!! Flush the toilet committee!!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/13/2015 10:59:00 AM
Oh my goodness, love it.....Sharon G.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/26/2015 4:19:00 PM
Hey skat. Your use of metaphor here is awesome and overpowering. This is one of those poems I could spend a week interpreting! I like the challenge here, it forces the reader to think and dig deep. Some things jump out like: "fed by these political rejects". The "Fed" is certainly made up of some of the most deplorable people in society. God forbid any one of them stood up for the needs of common people, they would definitely suffer serious "rejection". I could go on and on. Great poem!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/19/2015 2:10:00 PM
Did someone say something mean and stupid? their bad! Loved it. Anthony
Login to Reply
Date: 2/23/2015 11:49:00 PM
I am pretty sure I saw this one before, Just admiring it again. PD's handiwork is very strong in it too! Sure miss the old slammin' days!!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/12/2015 3:16:00 PM
I can only imagine what this is all about, but what a delightful romp your writing facilitates! Brilliantly strong and witty, gritty, a bit shitty. OK, now you have me doing it. Anyway, dropped by to love this. Thanks so much. Jerry
Login to Reply
Date: 1/25/2015 6:41:00 PM
Nothing like a double dose of raw sewage called reality
Login to Reply
Date: 10/29/2014 12:42:00 PM
LOL keeping the (not so well) wishers at bay .... as the man said Skat opinions are like a$$holes, everybody's got one... but your own is the most relevant...lmao xx
Login to Reply
Date: 8/21/2014 6:25:00 PM
lol i love this poem skat, its been a while so i got a lot of reading to catch up on
Login to Reply
Date: 6/30/2014 10:26:00 AM
You guys are the greatest slammers ever. If you were to put this on You Tube...It would go viral. Love it! Love it! Love it. Another fav. Elaine
Login to Reply
Date: 6/20/2014 1:51:00 AM
I HAD to check this one out. This one's got some hot fire behind it. Somebody pissed you all off. NEVER change your style, Don't listen to Academia and freaks who say punctuation and proper blah blah blah belong in poetry. Poetry, to me, is very much the same as taking a huge dump! All day we eat what's going on and when the time is right, AHH, POETIC JUSTICE, ripe, nasty, and good. BTW, Mister ROBOTO is back by popular demand, Like scat, the name Stuck. Domo Arigato Misses SKAT ah-Toe!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/8/2014 4:24:00 PM
This is great! Enjoyed the read.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/31/2014 12:20:00 PM
Love your spirit, SKAT A lioness with a kitten interior for those you love, Hugs SuZ
Login to Reply
Date: 5/19/2014 10:14:00 AM
WOW Skat, You said this with truth and spirit. Powerfully penned, Worthy of ten stars if I could give them. Thanks for sharing this:~) Love and Peace, Deborah
Login to Reply
Date: 5/15/2014 4:18:00 PM
ha ha don't wanna get on the wrong side of you Skat...lols x
Login to Reply
12345

Book: Reflection on the Important Things