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To Whom It May Concern

As time draws near I hold tight to the memories we've shared while accepting the chance to create more. I'll keep them stored up in my mind like an old chest full of treasured trinkets. Basking in your attention I can feel the warmth of your love beaming down on me like the sun in late July. Swinging from your every word as they escape your beautiful lips, I'm truly mesmerized by your beauty, charm & exquisite wit. The love we possess is as mysterious as the fireflies that dance under the evening skies. I thought of capturing you in a jar & keeping you for myself, but that would hinder your light from shining. All good things must come to an end, but I will forever love U.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/11/2013 11:19:00 AM
nice romance ;}
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Date: 6/13/2013 1:32:00 PM
Even though they say it will come back to you if it is meant to be, sometimes it does and you find yourself wishing it would go away...be careful what you ask for .
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Date: 6/10/2013 7:33:00 AM
Beautiful piece, I see you are a romantic.
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Date: 6/9/2013 6:43:00 PM
awww...a very nice respite
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Date: 6/9/2013 1:40:00 PM
Outstanding message in these lines! Direct & touching. Excellent!
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Date: 6/9/2013 12:49:00 PM
Love write....liked the fireflies bit so much! Thanks for your visits to my work! :)
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Date: 6/9/2013 9:07:00 AM
What a lovely romantic write. Enjoyed the lyrical format.
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Date: 6/9/2013 8:30:00 AM
This was very beautiful...I enjoyed this poem very much... thank you!
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Date: 6/9/2013 7:44:00 AM
Excellent. Nice poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 6/9/2013 6:38:00 AM
Dear Cathy, Inadvertently, you have repeated this delightful and tender poem of yours! I liked it!
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