Titles

Titles The love of two people that chose to grow as it sows With so much love in my heart like an hourglass full of sand that flows Our children are here one minute and gone the next as we did long ago Oh.., it’s so hard, letting go Mom, I love you more than a box of chocolates or a dozen red roses can show 9/10/2015 The Love of Two People Love in my heart Here One Minute And Gone The Next Letting Go Mom I love you Contest Name: Titles Sponsor By: Pendleton Arkwright

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/12/2015 8:06:00 PM

I think you've done a wonderful job with this challenging theme... A sentimental and truly beautiful poem, Eve! Good luck in the contest!

Eve Roper
Date: 9/12/2015 8:12:00 PM

Thank you, Kelly, I also thank you for the inspiring note you left me on your poem. Hugs Eve

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/11/2015 1:15:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Way to go..I enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Eve Roper
Date: 9/11/2015 1:53:00 PM

Thank you, Sara, Hugs dear friend Eve

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/11/2015 7:41:00 AM

We understand our parents when we reach the point in time that we have to submit ourselves to the same trials of life as they did! Beautiful sentimental writing filled with love and painful affection, dear Eve!

Eve Roper
Date: 9/11/2015 10:30:00 AM

Thank you, Demetrios, being a parent was hard but now that they are adults it is even harder to be a parent. Hugs Eve

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/11/2015 7:27:00 AM

Very clever and pretty use of your poem titles ... CayCay

Eve Roper
Date: 9/11/2015 10:32:00 AM

Hello CayCay,I wasn't sure what she wanted but I gave it my best shot. Hugs Eve