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This poem is written with the inspiration of the contest sponsored by our dear poet Nette Onclaud

TIME gold dime come and go like a wind’s swift blow vapor trail on one’s hands hold each minute’s worth on palms “no one can restore squandered time” June 5, 2014 9.35pm Third Place Contest: Create Your Pyramid Judged: 6/10/14 Sponsor: Poet Nette Onclaud

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/4/2014 12:58:00 PM

- I read this gem before - just as beautiful now as before, dear friend Leonora - I just wanted to wish you a beautiful and restful weekend - Take a little rest :) - Warm thoughts and hugggs :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun
Date: 7/4/2014 2:06:00 PM

I'm honored and so grateful for your another lovely visit my dearest friend Anne Lise. Thank u, thank u so much. Wishing you also the best of everything.Warm thoughts and many warm hugs back to u.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/16/2014 3:20:00 PM

wonderful way to honor time and life, lors... belated congrats on your fine slot in my challenge!.. huggs

Len Gasun
Date: 6/18/2014 9:16:00 AM

Thank you so much for my win and especially for appreciating my poem in your contest my very dear friend nette! Big hugs as well. Tcare always.

Kim Van Breda

Date: 6/14/2014 10:19:00 AM

Awesome words on time, and wonderfully illustrated in a pyramid. Great write. Xx~Xx

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 10:52:00 AM

Thank u so much my dear friend Kim. Big hugs!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/14/2014 8:06:00 AM

I really like this one, one of my favorites so far.

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 8:55:00 AM

Thank u so much my dear friend Richard. It's been an honor for me. Blessings to u and your loved ones. Big hugs!

Estela Canama

Date: 6/14/2014 6:40:00 AM

Wonderful! It is something we can ponder on... Congrats!

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 6:43:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Estela. Big hugs!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/13/2014 2:21:00 PM

So true and great for the contest. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 6:52:00 AM

Thank u so much my dear friend Lucy. Big hugs!

Len Gasun

Date: 6/13/2014 11:50:00 AM

Thank you ever sooo much my dear poet friends. Please forgive me for coming only now. But, I'll try to be back as soon as I can to read your poems and to thank you individually. I promise. I love u all. love much and biggest hugs, Leonora

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 6:56:00 AM

Hope you're forgiven my dearest.... <3me always your conscience ;)))))))

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/13/2014 1:46:00 AM

Ooh nice one. What a great contest idea. By the comment below you got third place, obviously others agree with me. Well done.

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 6:57:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend scott. Big hugs!

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/12/2014 2:44:00 PM

Very good, :) grats on third place. awesome ending :)

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 6:58:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Casarah. Big hugs!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/12/2014 12:07:00 PM

Congratulations on another great win!

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 6:59:00 AM

Thank you so much Pandita. Big hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/12/2014 4:40:00 AM

- Dear Leonora, congratulations on your well deserved 3rd place in the contest! - Well done as always! - Have a beautiful day in the sunshine :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 7:01:00 AM

Thank u thank u so much again my very dear friend Anne Lise. Big hugs! Have a beautiful day in sunshine as well and always! Big hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2014 12:02:00 AM

i love your imagery of gold and time like money on one's palms. Love that last line. Congrats, dear.

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 7:04:00 AM

Thank you so much my dearest friend Andrea. Big hugs!

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2014 11:16:00 PM

Leonora, :) CONGRATS in Nette's CREATE YOUR PYRAMID contest! Luv ~SKAT~

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 7:07:00 AM

Thank you so much my ever dearest Skat. Big big hugs!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/11/2014 7:30:00 PM

Hey awesome pyramid on this verse about time. As they say time is precious so we should not waste it. Well hubby just arrived for supper so have to run. I am feeling good and hope you are too. love phyl

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 7:14:00 AM

Belated thank u so much my very dear freind Phyllis. Yes, time is so precious my dear friend. Every minute is very valuable for me for my work, loved ones & dear friends (u're 1 of them) &for my passions; however' i'm always chasing it ;))))) Pls give my sweet regards to ur hubby. I'm so glad to know u r feeling good & so I am. God is good to all i know. God bless.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/11/2014 3:26:00 PM

Oh yes....that last line, is a bit of wisdom in a nutshell !! Well said !! Congratulations in your win, Leonora!

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 7:17:00 AM

Thank you sooo much my dear friend Carrie. Big hugs!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/11/2014 3:18:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 7:18:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Debbie. Big hugs!

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/11/2014 2:29:00 PM

Leonora, this is lovely. Congratulation on your win!

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 7:19:00 AM

Thank u so much my dear friend Faye. Big hugs!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2014 9:46:00 AM

Hello My lovely sweet sister.. Happy to see you on Nette's winning list.. Congratulations, with your sweet PYRAMID win.... sending hugs and love... My BFF always ~LINDA~

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 7:26:00 AM

Hi, my super lovely and ever dearest sis & BFF of mine in my mind & heart forever! Belated thank u, thank u sooo much for this lovely comments again and warm congrats. Sending lovely & sweet hugs to u right away from me my dearest sis. Missing u a lot. I always hope & pray you're doing well now. Hope you've received my tx msgs. Love u much sis! 4ever #1fan, sis,bff, Leo

Saba Khan

Date: 6/11/2014 9:15:00 AM

that's really true.. :)

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 7:28:00 AM

Thank u so much my dear friend Saba. Big hugs!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/11/2014 6:34:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win, creating a lovely Pyramid, Leo

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 7:30:00 AM

Belated many thanks once again my dear friend Dr. Ram. Big hugs!

Paul Callus

Date: 6/11/2014 3:01:00 AM

This is one of the best entries; congratulations, Leonora.....your win is a merited one. // paul

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 7:34:00 AM

Oh, thank u so much for this very lovely comment my dear friend Paul; but for me, yours is also one of the best ones 'cuz when I've read it, it was one of the champions which I like most. Big congratulations to u as well. Big hugs and cheers!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/11/2014 2:55:00 AM

congratulations on your fine win. Hugs jan xx

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 7:36:00 AM

Thank u so much my dear friend Jan. Big hugs!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/11/2014 2:40:00 AM

2nd line very reflective..:) I like it...:) congratulations!! :D

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 7:37:00 AM

Thank u so much my dear friend Olive. Big hugs!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/9/2014 2:07:00 AM

“no one can restore squandered time” Well said. Wonderful write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 7:40:00 AM

Thank u so much my dear friend Ravi. Big hugs!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2014 10:28:00 AM

Hello My dearest sis and Bff... Thank you for taking your time, and sending me a few messages.. I sure need your light and friendship... I did enjoy this poem,... Time is all we have at times, .... :):) enjoying your poem, Nette will love it... always & forever...Linda

Len Gasun
Date: 6/14/2014 7:52:00 AM

You are very much welcome my dearest sis-bff. So late to read & reply but I want you to know again that I am & I'll always be here for u. Just call my name & I'll b there, ok. You & your family are always in my thoughts & prayers. Sending you many hugs tonight with kisses. lovem4evrLeonora