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“Your skin like dawn Mine like musk One paints the beginning of a certain end. The other, the end of a sure beginning.” Passing Time: Poem by Maya Angelou Harkening all the way back to the origin of time I ponder conjectures about the theory of Big Bang-- A moment that exploded into infinite expanse, And I wonder if this ticking clock will ever stop Collapsing on self into ashes of nothingness Or will it keep stretching space on eternal path; Its existence, compared to mine, incredibly vast-- I am just a speck of dust in its cosmic compass-- A spot on its continuum, born in recent past. Living in my present I can easily retrace steps, No theories are needed to ascertain my start; And unlike this universe that goes on and on, My end is as assured, as beginning of end was. July 5, 2020 Time – 8 Word Challenge Poetry Contest Sponsor: A Dear Heart

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Date: 12/17/2021 3:33:00 AM
A highly profound and philosophical writing !As the grains of sand in an hour glass, time ticks away to eternity and our end is assured. No one can desist the ravages of time . Indeed an excellent write with much poetic beauty....
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Date: 3/16/2021 9:21:00 AM
I think you meant Dusk not “Musk” ;0) I enjoyed the poem either way, plus the added chuckle. Blessings Rick.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/16/2021 10:29:00 AM
Thank you Richard--much appreciate. That word-- musk --is a quote from Maya Angelo poem. She definitely means "musk"--you can look it up.
Date: 10/16/2020 1:50:00 PM
Mysterious and comprehensible at the same time... Well written, Vijay! ~Angie
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Date: 7/8/2020 7:35:00 PM
"I am just a speck of dust in its cosmic compass" So true. Your entire poem curls softly around me. You have created another Masterpiece. I see that you have won in this contest. Of course you did. Well deserved my dear friend. Congratulations. :) Brandy
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Date: 7/7/2020 5:33:00 PM
You rose to this 8-word challenge with excellent results, Vijay! Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul
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Date: 7/7/2020 4:43:00 PM
Vijay, congratulations on your win in my time contest, wonderful writing _Constance
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Date: 7/7/2020 2:17:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win my friend :)
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Date: 7/7/2020 8:18:00 AM
Awesome write Vij...Congrats!! on the win my friend...best wishes...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 7/7/2020 1:52:00 AM
Back with congrats Vijay.. Great win..
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Date: 7/6/2020 5:51:00 AM
A very profound and philosophical poem in which are mirrored many ideas of past great minds like Plato and Heraclitus my dearest friend, Vijay! Time is the father of all and certainly doesn't let any " speck of dust " gone! for it uses it again and again as the world goes into or out of existence! Superb writing! Blessings my friend!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/6/2020 6:43:00 AM
Your thoughts always enlighten my friend--much appreciate the kind remarks--many thanks, Demetrios.
Date: 7/6/2020 4:06:00 AM
"No theories are needed".. You have your own theories, as time revolves around you.. You perceive and conceive time according to a rich vision, dipped into a deep meaningfulness and a wide awareness forged by all the precious time you have been able to mould for the welfare of your Self and Soul.. Genuine thoughts of enlightenment and powerful feelings of beauty! A great work to be not only in my fave list but highly recommend! So delighted to read, dear Vijay! Best regards and blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/6/2020 6:42:00 AM
So very kind of you Besma--always a delight to read your comments. Much appreciate, as always. many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 7/6/2020 12:49:00 AM
I am just a speck of dust in its cosmic compass--A spot on its continuum, born in recent past.. What a lovely line.. Superb verse Vijay.. Good luck..
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Date: 7/6/2020 6:39:00 AM
Thank you Jenish--much appreciate.
Date: 7/5/2020 10:08:00 PM
So clever is this Vijay..
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Date: 7/6/2020 6:39:00 AM
Much appreciate Harry--many thanks.
Date: 7/5/2020 3:01:00 PM
Great write Vijay, interesting to know the end is planned at the beginning, best wish
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/5/2020 3:43:00 PM
Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.
Date: 7/5/2020 1:03:00 PM
Interesting verse Vijay, I often wonder about the big bang theory, with the universe expanding and when it stops will it contract, hopefully we won't be around to see it. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/5/2020 1:40:00 PM
I guess we may never know--much appreciate, Tom--many thanks.
Date: 7/5/2020 10:20:00 AM
Always live each moment as though it were your last. It just might be. Also think on this, When we are dead and gone all that remains on this earth of us is the memory we leave behind. Will anyone want to remember us? Food for thought. Fine write here my friend. Makes one think. God Bless, JB
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/5/2020 1:39:00 PM
Great advice Judy--much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks.
Date: 7/5/2020 10:09:00 AM
Very well written Vijay, I love the poems of Maya Angelou, nice introduction to your thoughts, which are deep and full of meaning!
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Date: 7/5/2020 1:38:00 PM
Honored by your comments, John--much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 7/5/2020 9:06:00 AM
Nice write...It's hard to say what is...in this great unknown...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/5/2020 1:37:00 PM
Much appreciate Arturo--many thanks.
Date: 7/5/2020 8:01:00 AM
In the grand scheme of things we are entirely inconsequential. Your expression of this reality is very well conveyed, Vijay; an excellent write.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/5/2020 1:36:00 PM
So true my friend--many thanks Lawrence--much appreciate.
Date: 7/5/2020 7:31:00 AM
Such an enlightening verse my friend. Your words take me to another world. Best wishes :)
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Date: 7/5/2020 1:36:00 PM
Thank you Aditi--much appreciate your visit and comments, my friend.

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