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Three Poems Rejected This Morning

1. Find My Way I'm going to find my jagged shard way back to you, cut through the muck of television life, burn through all the weeds, just to see you again, cross an ocean in an old Rabbit just to be at your door on time. 2. Unthinking I don't want hollow eyes, which is why I read even while everyone else is pushing back drinks. I sit here and bury myself in Faulkner, Tennessee Williams, whoever I can, to find a true soul in the dull evening. 3. More Than Another She wants to know if I love her more than another. There are no others. Don't get me wrong. There used to be. An endless string of others. Tall, skinny, short, round, blonde, awful, beautiful, kind, rude. Of course, they were all in my mind, so what is the matter in the end.

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Date: 5/19/2016 6:40:00 AM
Greetings Russ. Congrats for having your work featured in the Poetry Sop homepage!! ;-)
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Date: 5/11/2016 12:20:00 AM
Russ C, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/10/2016 12:22:00 PM
Russ, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs
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Date: 5/10/2016 11:04:00 AM
Russ, , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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