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Thoughts On Morality

We learn right from wrong by the zenith of our youth but do we learn moral lessons in the exact way, and do some learn them at all? We show distaste toward those whose definitions of morality might very well differ from what we figure to be correct. We need to look beyond our own realities. There are children who lack guidance and some who know only cruel stings of abuse. There are children who lack even basic values, for they witness horrendous acts, yet harshly we would judge those kids when they go bad. Children of the streets and some in the ghettos too; also priviledged ones who have no one to look up to - wild and crazy they run. Wicked they seem. We judge them by our own standards of right and wrong. What can be done? Can we not all agree at least on one good rule? Golden is the rule which we must teach today’s youth. Until we ensure all children feel love and protected, society will fail. June 1, 2021 NA in the Heptastich Poetry Contest For the 'ALL YOURS (Jun 25)' Poetry Contest of Brian Strand

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Date: 7/1/2021 3:42:00 PM
Well said, Andrea. Kids learn their morality from other kids. Essentially, kids are raised by other kids, and they grow up to have kids of their own, and kids grow up to be the doctors, lawyers, etc. who take care of us. Hopefully, most people do have a sense of the golden rule eventually. Otherwise, we're doomed! Great poem. Bryan
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Date: 6/28/2021 8:52:00 AM
Truly, our children are precious treasure and we are guardians of their growth for the future. Well said Andrea. Congratulations on our win my friend!
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Date: 6/21/2021 12:14:00 AM
Hmm.. it's all here dear; well Andrea a true heart You have I see, thought and observation in each Line sprung from your pen.? No words are not Enough at times.. Yet I try to do you justice here And also here words are not enough.' Yet you try Dear poet, and without trial? Without testing? We would have no hope, yet in our Searching we Will have chance to call on God'
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Date: 6/5/2021 6:46:00 AM
Wise words in verse on our thoughts about morality dear Andrea... I wish to fav this... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 6/4/2021 1:39:00 PM
tried twice to leave a comment for your winners limerick - LOL, great limerick
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Date: 6/4/2021 1:36:00 PM
sad write here, my friend - yes, if only everyone followed that golden rule
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Date: 6/4/2021 11:57:00 AM
What a wonderful world we could live in if the Golden Rule were followed.
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Date: 6/3/2021 7:36:00 PM
Andrea, Fine strokes in your compassionate pen. Perhaps the golden rule is the essence of any lasting society. Pray we teach it in time again. -Richard
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Date: 6/3/2021 11:04:00 AM
A awesome write on this poem Andrea. The golden rule is the way to go and one we should all follow. love phyl
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Date: 6/3/2021 5:56:00 AM
Sublime piece, Andrea:-) One of the best I've read for the contest. All the best!
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Date: 6/2/2021 11:00:00 PM
A powerful poem, Andrea:)
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Date: 6/2/2021 9:38:00 PM
Hello Andrea … your verse is really great. It goes with an adage I heard as a child; what monkey see monkey do’ meaning our lives rely on being educated in the right way - very good indeed Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:57:00 AM
WoW! Andrea, You have penned such a moving message. Your last stanza sums up your heartfelt piece very well. “Golden is the rule which we must teach today’s youth. Until we ensure all children feel love and protected, society will fail.” It was so powerful and impactful. I heard you loud and clear; we as a society must ensure that “ all” children feel love and protected. Well done. Bravo to you for penning such a write. Congrats in advance. For me, this is an instant fav:-)Alexis
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Date: 6/1/2021 8:39:00 PM
Your message comes from the heart and is the truth for those children that experience that fate. The question is what can we all do for these children to make a difference in their lives. Heartfelt piece Andrea, one that was heartfelt.
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Date: 6/1/2021 7:32:00 PM
A very deeply touching [oece with a great message we should all hear and remember. Well said. Bravo my friend. God Bless, JB As for your question on my poem. Jawjah is Georgia and Bard means Borrowed. ;)lol
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Date: 6/1/2021 7:00:00 PM
Marvelous writing from your heart on a topic near and dear to any parent and/or teacher. I appreciated every word you wrote, Andrea. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 6/1/2021 6:02:00 PM
WOW, you should have a lot of patience and good spirit to write the seven-stanza Heptastich, great subject, and excellent wording. It took me a bit of time to pen mine too. Best wishes for a win
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