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Thoughts of You

Thoughts of you Every moment came thoughts of you, Each breath inhaled a false ego, You seemed avoiding me although, I was drowning deeper in the blue ! Should I have spoken once to you, Should I have held your hand and said, How much I really had wanted you, How much had I been longing for you ! Your smiling face appearing in front of me, Whenever I opened my eyes would flee, Your sweet words and charming voice, Must have perfectly rhymed if hard had I tried ! Do you have a clue ? Thoughts of you ! Through and through, Thoughts of you ! Do you have a clue ? Thoughts of you ! Through and through, Thoughts of you ! Written November 28th, 2014 For contest I love Rock and roll by Kelly Deschler Inspired by song 'Always on my mind' by Elvis Presley

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/29/2014 9:27:00 AM

Hi Upma! 'Always on my mind' has been one of my favourite songs for many years! This poem goes very well with it; many times we ask ourselves "what if...?" but answers are hard to come by! (of course, we are free to dream:)) // paul

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/29/2014 4:47:00 AM

lovely Dr Upma it is catchy and romantic gl in contest hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/28/2014 2:56:00 PM

When we have feelings for someone, better I is to express them for otherwise we may lose the chance of a glorious love! Beautiful poem Dr. Upma, my wishes accompany you on the contest! Good luck!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/28/2014 2:00:00 PM

- 'Always on My Mind' by Elvis Presley, is one of his best, Dr. Upma! - Thank you for beautiful poem - Good luck in the contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/28/2014 11:14:00 AM

Always on my mind, one of my favourite songs of Elvis. Well done Dr. Sharma.