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Those Nights When

Those hands When they touch me My skin comes alive Those lips When you kiss me They intoxicate Those hips When they press in My fire rises Those breasts When I caress I am in heaven Those eyes When I see them My world is complete Those moments When passion reigns You drive me insane Fantasy Contest

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Date: 6/16/2013 3:16:00 PM
still waiting for the poem about the turd in the grass.LMFAO!Colleen
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/16/2013 5:58:00 PM
Your wish is my command. Check it out.
Date: 6/16/2013 9:45:00 AM
this should do well Richard very tasteful but extremely passionate gl Shadow x
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/16/2013 12:31:00 PM
Thanks Shadow
Date: 6/15/2013 2:30:00 PM
oohh la la, Richard. You are on fire with this one. Good entry!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/15/2013 3:31:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, hugs Rick
Date: 6/15/2013 12:33:00 AM
Insanity is better than monotony... he he. Good work! When people say fantasy I always think of dragons and pixies, not realizing the "other" kind of fantasies that could just as easily apply.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/15/2013 8:11:00 AM
You bet it is
Date: 6/14/2013 6:15:00 PM
A nice fantasy aye! Light & love
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/14/2013 8:01:00 PM
Thanks Debbie, what form am I writing in?
Date: 6/14/2013 5:02:00 PM
ooh yes, I like this a lot! it's very sensual and tastefully erotic (good title too) :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/14/2013 8:02:00 PM
Thanks Charlotte I'm pleased you like it.
Date: 6/14/2013 1:46:00 PM
Well....I'm speechless...that in itself says....A great deal! 7
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/15/2013 5:33:00 PM
:-)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/15/2013 3:32:00 PM
No question mark somehow hit wrong key. Just Smiling!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/14/2013 11:28:00 PM
Question mark????
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/14/2013 8:02:00 PM
You make me smile?
Date: 6/14/2013 11:21:00 AM
Hell yeah! Embracing the seductive whispers of night. Awesome!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/14/2013 8:03:00 PM
Thanks Drake
Date: 6/14/2013 10:33:00 AM
great title and a wonderful poem!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/14/2013 8:04:00 PM
Thanks ilene. I'm glad you like it.
Date: 6/14/2013 9:00:00 AM
You cannot only make words come alive,but you can feel the emotions.Love Colleen
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/14/2013 8:04:00 PM
Aww thanks Colleen. Hugs Rick
Date: 6/14/2013 8:49:00 AM
Richard that's the spirit! I believe the ladies will fall in love with your excellent poem! Good luck!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/14/2013 8:06:00 PM
Thanks Demetrios, it is nice getting all this positive feedback.
Date: 6/14/2013 8:28:00 AM
Fantasy or Reality... great poem with plenty of descriptive passion.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/14/2013 8:06:00 PM
Hi Kim, thanks so much for the sweet comment. Hugs Rick.
Date: 6/14/2013 7:21:00 AM
the passion builds as you read erotic very tastefully done excellent pen Shadow
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/14/2013 7:27:00 AM
Good morning Shaddow, thanks for commenting

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