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This Year

The fresh year slips within my dream to raise the light of compassion... a healing smile, a touch agleam can nourish hearts in starvation like orphans, flamed with a vision. Francine Roberts' This Year in English Quintain by nette onclaud 1/12/2015

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/17/2015 9:32:00 PM

Poems like this are just such a pleasure to read! :) Beautiful

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/14/2015 6:12:00 PM

Just a pleasure to read!

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/14/2015 9:54:00 AM

Such a beautiful image, this fresh new year...taking small steps like orphans......love this !

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/13/2015 12:55:00 PM

Well pen my dear girl Nette, but it is a little sad, I have enjoyed reading your work this year and I hope to read more of your wondrous work in the year to come, cheri hugs

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/13/2015 11:04:00 AM

Very nice pen Nette! Enjoyed This Year from you dear friend. A 7 from me! Have a nice day! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxx D.^0^

Jan Allison

Date: 1/13/2015 8:00:00 AM

Wonderful wise words Nette - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/13/2015 7:29:00 AM

Aww, you are such a kind person and great writer, the perfect woman! :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/13/2015 7:25:00 AM

Inspiring! A wonderful vision to have for the new year.

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/13/2015 7:15:00 AM

Wow Nette, you have outdone yourself with this masterful piece my friend! I surely loved reading this fabulous poem here this morning! You have delighted me with your harmonious write! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/13/2015 4:55:00 AM

A great resolution for the New Year it would be, dear Nette! Marvelous verse!

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/12/2015 8:24:00 PM

I enjoyed this poem immensely, the rhyme and rhythm are perfect and the story line flows with a leisurely beat. Emile.

Tim Smith

Date: 1/12/2015 4:41:00 PM

We should all heed your wisdom nette...give of ourselves freely...huggs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/12/2015 1:14:00 PM

Good desire for the year head. Reads like a winner to me. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Jajosh Ongado

Date: 1/12/2015 1:00:00 PM

Nette, You have a gift of generosity and magnificent poetry. I am inclined to do a mission outside the self through your inspiring verse!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/12/2015 12:41:00 PM

- Lovely written from your beautiful heart dear friend Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/12/2015 12:33:00 PM

The fresh year slips within my dream... what a divine write nette. You always make my life blissful my friend>>rajat