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This Golden Day: a Madrigal For Amber

My Amber dear, awake to me. My madrigal has melody in trills of the gold finch that you hear. Awake to me, my Amber dear! It’s dawn. Arise, my angel sweet. Put golden slippers on your feet. We’ll follow where our songbird flies. My angel sweet. It’s dawn; arise! We must make haste, my lovely lass, to walk on glistening velvet grass. A day like this we cannot waste. My lovely lass, we must make haste! A meadow waits, my cherished one. Through sun-bright posies we shall run, where dewy fragrance permeates. My cherished one, a meadow waits! I know a stream, my darling love, a shining mountain sits above. And water falls where gold fish gleam. My darling love, I know a stream. We’ll find a rock, oh, maiden fair, where you can loose your yellow hair. And please me more. . . unloose your frock! Oh, maiden fair, we’ll find a rock. My one true heart, do come away. Beneath the falls this golden day, pure pleasure will our love impart. Do come away, my one true heart! 4/17/14 for the Colourful Verse Contest of Charlotte Puddifoot (Just playing around with swap quatrain form, imagining one of those guys from centuries ago trying to woo his maiden!)

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Date: 8/20/2014 1:12:00 PM
liked what you have written in this quatrain. love phyl
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Date: 4/30/2014 10:35:00 AM
Andrea, love the win....SKAT
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Date: 4/26/2014 5:10:00 AM
Congrats on the win and thanks for sharing this colorful poem, Andrea
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Date: 4/26/2014 1:40:00 AM
Hey Andrea, it's nice to almost have time here... LOL.. congrats in this contest.. Linda
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Date: 4/26/2014 12:02:00 AM
Andrea wit wid colors that's u ! Great poem adorable! Congrats on great win !
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Date: 4/25/2014 9:21:00 PM
Good work....
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Date: 4/25/2014 7:15:00 PM
This is a truly admirable poem. I like the repeat alternations as well. I felicitate (congratulate) you on your win!
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Date: 4/25/2014 6:31:00 PM
Congrats, andrea, this is a lovely piece!
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Date: 4/25/2014 5:36:00 PM
YOur "fooling around" is pretty good.!Congrats. I really like this form...BG
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Date: 4/25/2014 5:15:00 PM
I would have placed this poem higher, congratulations on you win, maybe it's because I'm partial to rhymes and its skill when done right
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/25/2014 9:13:00 PM
this was sweet of you to say. It's all in the eye of the beholder. You and I are sonneteers and that is what will always draw us in first! an excellent rhyme.
Date: 4/25/2014 4:57:00 PM
Yup and I LOVE repetition in verse, I was glad to finally realize what Charlotte didn't like about my verse LOL, oh well you are #1 ;) congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/25/2014 4:44:00 PM
andrea, this one posed a real problem for me! if I'm honest it's not my kind of poetry, and I think you'll know that, and the use of repetition pushed it further down the list (I was just saying to debbie the other day that repetitive forms irk me! lol) I know you won't take it personally from me, and you know that I know the extraordinary scope and technical skill of your work...I did love the vivid golds, ambers and yellows! and "unloose your frock"?!! haha naughty :) congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/21/2014 4:14:00 PM
Hi Andrea; Your playing around turned out real good. I liked it I also think it was beautiful back then. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 4/21/2014 2:54:00 PM
love this, Andrea - I thought it would be about your former odd lodger, LOL (the cook!!)
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Date: 4/20/2014 4:00:00 AM
How romantic Andrea! Back to the times of knights and dames. Well-tackled form...flows...very musical, idyllic. Happy Easter. :) // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/25/2014 3:43:00 PM
congrats on win; merited better. :)
Date: 4/19/2014 11:29:00 PM
Very colorful verse! Hope you win and thanks for the comment on my confessional piece! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/19/2014 11:11:00 AM
A magical and creative write Andrea!
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Date: 4/19/2014 10:15:00 AM
Cyrano could have penned this one. Sure to win any maiden's heart. Love, daver
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Date: 4/19/2014 9:31:00 AM
A lovely madrigal Andrea..I love the form
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Date: 4/19/2014 8:56:00 AM
nice wooing Andie Light & Love
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Date: 4/19/2014 5:45:00 AM
Your words are pure and golden no matter what form you write in.
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Date: 4/19/2014 5:12:00 AM
Imagination runs wild in this antique work..I really like this kind though..This is true poetry to me..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/19/2014 3:45:00 AM
Reads smoothly, like you've done this many a time. Thanks for the win in your competition, I have changed to "free verse"; just when I thought I was understanding the difference between 'free' and 'blank'. May Easter treat you well.
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Date: 4/18/2014 10:46:00 PM
They would have been copying your words Andrea. This is lovely and so romantic!
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Date: 4/18/2014 6:55:00 PM
I love you swap Andrea...Ah the simple times..Your describe the wooing splendidly..Sometimes I wish times were still like this...hugs
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