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Thirsty Soul

There was a thirsty soul on the earth plane That never stopped for water to complain To all places went to search For her thirst desired to quench, Distressed, to heaven soared dew to obtain! © Demetrios Trifiatis 07 November 2015

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Michael Tor

Date: 11/8/2015 2:09:00 PM

A wonderful thought provoking write my friend!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/9/2015 7:25:00 AM

So happy to receive your visit again, dear Michael! Thank you very much!

Eve Roper

Date: 11/8/2015 7:37:00 AM

Wish all would "distressed, to heaven soared dew to obtain"! Wonderful write

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/9/2015 7:24:00 AM

One blessed day, all will do, my dearest friend, Eve! Thank you!

Tim Smith

Date: 11/8/2015 6:39:00 AM

What a terrific limerick my friend

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/9/2015 7:23:00 AM

Thank you my good friend, Tim, for your kind visit and comment!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/7/2015 12:18:00 PM

- Dear friend Demetrios, a great limerick! - Best wishes for a peaceful and lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/7/2015 6:21:00 PM

A peaceful and lovely weekend for you too, I wish, my dearest friend, Anne-Lise. Thank you for the visit and comment! Hugs!

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/7/2015 9:09:00 AM

Demetrios, this is such a well written limerick. I enjoyed it's message. Great job!:-) Alexis 7

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/7/2015 6:20:00 PM

Thank you my dear, Alexis, for your lovely visit and comment!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/7/2015 7:49:00 AM

Lovely and uplifting Demetrios - I have a couple of limericks to post in the near future:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/7/2015 7:59:00 AM

I spend less and less time here at the moment Demetrios - may give poetry a break and hope my muse returns:-( hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/7/2015 7:56:00 AM

What a lovely coincidence! At the moment I was commenting on your poem you were doing the same thing in mine! Wonderful synchronicity! Thank you Jan. Happy you are well and kicking...writing I mean! Ha-ha!