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The song selection was a choice between Iris and in the arms of an angel, from the movie, City of Angels. I chose Iris. This is not a romantic sonnet, but I like the lyrics in the song.

Dedicated to all those who go out of their way to make others smile and light up their lives, without wanting anything in return. They walk amongst us..

This sonnet is not Iambic pentameter, but I did stick to 10 syllables per line.

They walk amongst us, but in silent ways, spreading peace and love without any praise. When thunder roars and lightning strikes in rain they watch over us, healing bleeding pain. Yet we do not see their celestial light, nor do they shed feathers within our sight. Happy to hide behind unknown faces, empathy guides them to deprived places. Heal and soothe, they prevent tears from flowing, touch our hearts to leave our spirits glowing. From Sydney to London, Rome to Bombay, provide moments that take our breath away Their acts of grace form a ripple effect, kind gestures that help people to connect.

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David Crandall

Date: 4/24/2024 8:38:00 PM

A nice recognition of those angels around us, that, without them, we probably would not be where we are today.

Benjamin Rosser

Date: 12/25/2023 8:29:00 AM

Nice. About "angels", or compassionate people, among us I presume.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/21/2023 3:08:00 PM

Congratulations, Silent!

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/21/2023 1:22:00 PM

Your prowess as a master of sonnets is demonstrated by this exquisite poem Silent One. Your work is truly exceptional. I extend my sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest.

Joseph May

Date: 11/21/2023 1:05:00 PM

WE may have met angels and didn't know, Ver nicely Silent, Congrats on your win

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/31/2021 3:53:00 AM

stupendous writings

Jude Herrick

Date: 11/2/2020 3:47:00 AM

Mentor

Silent One
Date: 11/2/2020 6:50:00 AM

Indeed...

Tansy Roekaerts

Date: 9/25/2020 10:56:00 AM

i cant get th. is poem out of my head ive already commented on it I think. it sticks with me for some reason

Silent One
Date: 11/2/2020 6:51:00 AM

Because, only a few walk among you.... If you ever find one, keep them close... they are special.

James Inman

Date: 9/1/2020 2:51:00 PM

A tender and kind write SO.

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 8/15/2020 11:09:00 PM

Lovely theme, beautifully handled

Diana77 Wh

Date: 11/19/2019 5:43:00 PM

I had to check this out after your comment on my poem. I really like this. Thanks for sharing it.

Valerie Staton

Date: 10/18/2019 5:56:00 AM

You are definitely right in stating angels walk amongst us. Celestial and in human form. Thank you for writing this beautiful poem!

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/20/2019 11:43:00 PM

Beautiful read, Si; I like to think there is a little angel in all of us, we just need the right inspiration to shine. Great write!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/15/2019 1:03:00 AM

A wonderful poem to share with us all. There are givers and there are takers, but I would like to think that the givers outnumber the takers! A smile and a greeting is all one needs, a giver, who expects nothing in return - but a smile would be nice! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Valerie Staton

Date: 1/1/2019 8:12:00 AM

Beautiful...

Vera Duggan

Date: 12/26/2018 6:24:00 PM

Silent thank you so much for this dedication, this made me smile and lit up my life, it is such a beautiful sonnet, thank you for sharing and take care......Vera

Frances Schiavina

Date: 12/26/2018 9:33:00 AM

Why didn't I think of that? Awesome!

Jan Terry

Date: 11/30/2018 5:06:00 PM

Hello, Silent One. Checking in to see what I've been missing. You never disappoint me. You are one of the poets who motivate me to write. I don't post most of my poems but I am still writing and learning from poets like you. I love this sonnet especially because I love the music and vocals from 'City of Angels'. It just fits perfectly and is very moving. Best wishes for the holidays.

Bobby May

Date: 11/27/2018 8:30:00 AM

You are an amazing poet!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/26/2018 10:22:00 AM

Just awesome. love phyl

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/18/2018 9:26:00 AM

Exquisite proof that you are a sonnet master my friend. Every verse was like a slice of mom's homemade apple pie to me. Light, Truth and Poetry- so delicious and so brilliantly conceived.. A fav.. a true and brightly shining gem...

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/18/2018 8:54:00 AM

Hi Silent, This is such a beautiful write my friend. There are such people who always seem to come into your life when you are at your lowest, to lift you up so you can still travel life's track. This is such a gentle poem that sings the glory of such people. As always, you manage to say so much in your poetic flow. An excellent piece my friend. Belated congratulations on your Poem Of The Day. Much deserved. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/17/2018 9:02:00 AM

The empathy and love in this poem shines through so sweetly, but silently. Beautiful, Missive,Silent One. I loved this part: "Heal and soothe, they prevent tears from flowing, touch our hearts to leave our spirits glowing." Congratulations on POTD. I just found this today, this morning or I would have written sooner.

Lyric Man

Date: 11/16/2018 5:27:00 AM

SO.. you yourself are one of those! I salute your write, but I salute you as well!!

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/13/2018 2:57:00 PM

Hello SO!! Very-well done in every respect!! Yes, they do walk amongst us for sure. And congratulations on POTD too. Very well-deserved. A FAVE!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary