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They Got Em

i heard from the president news of the desent of the present demise of the enemy no longer will he be a sigh of diplomacy or any sigh of false liberty they got that SOB dead in Pakistani osama been laden the scurge of history ("been" as in past tense)

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/6/2011 2:48:00 PM

Good one in honor of what our men in the armed forces did to bring about some freedom from the threat of terrorism..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/15/2011 10:51:00 AM

Yes, we have many real perpetrators that make this world a scary place. Not only one. love phyl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/7/2011 10:41:00 AM

A powerful write, John, and how creatively you used "been" instead of "bin." Please keep the prayers coming, dear friend. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 5/2/2011 1:54:00 PM

"there are none so enslaved as those who falsely believe they are free"...if only it were true that bin laden was responsible for the attacks I would be as happy as the next person to see him gone; alas the real perpetrators are still very much alive and a lot closer to home...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/2/2011 7:29:00 AM

A proud day for America and our armed forces and the end result of this evil man's demise.. even throwing him into the ocean was too good for his burial.. hope none other arise to take his place to torment those who enjoy Godly freedom luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/1/2011 11:03:00 PM

john, so nice to read you again.. i like this osama been laden, lol... you woke me up... greeeat! :) huggs, nette